Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
Ben was having the worst day of his life—then he died. But instead of moving on to whatever comes next, he woke up in the Wizarding World as Benedict Brown, the alternate male version of Lavender Brown. Which is... concerning, because Lavender Brown did not have a great time during the Second Wizarding War.
On the bright side, he’s apparently the Dovahkiin. And he has a Skyrim shop system. So, you know, pros and cons.
Can he survive Hogwarts, Death Eaters, and whatever else this world throws at him? Or will he end up as werewolf chow just like Lavender? One thing’s for sure—he’s going to loot everything that isn’t nailed down.
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Author-Ape here, this is my Aubligatory 5 start rating. If you are reading this, then please give this novel a read, it will mean the world to me. I am waiting for your comments and reviews.
So far so good. I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter outside of Hogwarts too. New adventures with the OC are what I am looking forward to.
The idea of the story is good, but the author is not doing it right. For a guy that lived to 22 years old he is disappointingly STUPID. MC’s wand didn’t work for him since he got it and instead of telling his parents about this so they take him to olivanders for a new wand, he goes to hogwarts with the incompatible wand, FOR MORE THAN A MONTH, then he gets one from the room of requirement. Which DOES NOT make any sense. everything the room makes is conjured and you can’t take it out of the room. Also there is some writing mistakes.
Well the story is very mid. Nothing really happened in 40 chapters. Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space,
Is this dropped, please reply I really like this series and hope for it to continue, also hope your health is good author. Well do please continue this masterpiece it deserves a good ending.
Recently downgraded rating, so I publish my own, otherwise it's too much. Great story with an interesting plot, the pace of development is ok. The report is over comrade major!
Probably second best Harry potter fanfic till now, after HP: A Magical Journey. Writing quality and character development is great along with a good plot.
Haven't read any of the chaps. But the Dovahkiin and HP in a fic are totally banger. I hope you somehow can finish the story. 5 Stars for support🔥🔥
Stories good, my onpy gripe is how the MC outright ignores his powers sometimes for the point of plot. I can understand forgetting or even ubderutilizing skills and powers as that’s just a human limitation. However I feel as though the MC conveniently forgets things sometimes. The most recent of course being him not putting the horcrux diary in his pocket simension. Which why? Why wouldn’t he do that? It’s what one of the most inportant things pertaining to what could be a deadly enemy. Why didn’t he outright sell the thing to the shop? What could he have possibly wanted from it that didn’t have him do these things immediately? He’s shown to have thought out these issues too. He should realize what’s her face has taken it and just use Clairvoyence to immediately go and get it. However I can feel how he going to go confront her on it, Dumbledore will get involved someonehow, and he’s going to be watched. I understand a-lot of the things that happen in this story and appreciate how the MC has flaws and limitations. What I don’t like is how he struggles to do what needs to be done, or actually confirm some of the most important things to his survival are secure. Realistically he should just go and get the diary without talking to anyone nicking it. What is she gonna do? Accuse him of stealing his own property. Overall I feel like this occurence is like watching the Flash TV show all over again. The MC is getting to the point where he should be able to handle children his age. However because we need conflict the author makes him forget, or suddenly nerfs him in some regard. Again I’m fine with flaws, I’m not those people whining about how he should be perfect. There however should be a certain level of capability because no matter what the guy was what 24 in his past life? At that age you understand that there are some things you cannot forget and make sure get done. And if this situation escalates into a huge issue where the MC couldn’t bring himself to steal his stuff back. Then I’m not to hopeful for what comes next to create conflict. I really like the story I just get the vibes that this is a prelude to a lot of forced conflict that shouldn’t exist.
Really good story, just wondering when the next chapters will drop?
Это шедевр. побольше бы таких фанфиков.прочиьал на одном дыхании проработка деталей на высоте и сюжета.но я бы выбрал его тётю любовным интересом.как говарится ин.ест это семейное.удачи в написание новых глав вам.
the story is great , funy and engaging , the only cons i see is : - updates - some time MC do thing that he specifically mentioned in previous chapter that he won’t and it seems he don't see that all in all story is good and recommend to give it a try
1. Grammar: Excellent, I have no real notes. 2. Plot: well executed, and the transmigration wasn't a cliche. 3. Potential: 100/10 I'm personally hoping for some Skyrim-style vampirism of lycanthropy. And possibly some lore-friendly Mod content. Update speed: let's be honest it never is enough right?
Pretty fun story. Really enjoyed it. MC is fun and believable. Interesting Skyrim gimmick. Feels a bit cheesy that mc can get infinite money by throwing trash into the system. But infinite money gives more room to create a more interesting story and the author does not need to focus on grinding money to slowly get all Skyrim spells.