Harry Potter Erotica [R-18]

For a book that says Harry Potter Erotica you surely have made an excellent plot so far. I think I see where you are headed with a larger female to male population ratio but overall

I was expecting silver but i struck gold. It's entertainment and i want more, keep up the good work and don't drop.

It's really a nice twist in the story although I would have preferred if Harry was transferred to this new world when Voldemort threw the killing curse at him in the last volume. Since that would have given Harry even more experience and excellence, furthermore his interactions would have been different knowing the truth from Snape's tears. Though please continue this story as it's been a really long time since I have read a decent Harry potter fanfic and this one shows promise. I really like it so far.🥰🥰

I've read 12 chapters so far, and there hasn't been an 18+ scene yet, but I don't mind. I like how the story develops — it feels very smooth. Great job!

Aunque no lleva muchos episodios me está gustando la trama y la velocidad de la historia, espero no la dejes de actualizar como otros autores, espero muchas escenas smut smut. 😉😉🥵

Very well written characters, and conversations that seem realistic to read. Great novel, hope the author continues it.

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Surprisingly, it's quite good. I was expecting smut and got an interesting plot.

I only read 10 chaps so far , and I gotta say this is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read. I love how it just flips everything we know and is doing the exact opposite. The writing quality is very good as well. I do hope it will not go too overboard with the smut stuff because that would take this fic down a notch, in my opinion.

One of the best HP fics I've ever read. seriously bro why is this so goo?!?!?!?

Great build up just hope the rest of the story keeps pace! Great work!

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writing quality is very good. no mistakes or anything. the language is understandable and coherent. story is developing in a very interesting direction. the premise is very interesting and you (the author) are exploring the world a lot the scenes depicted are believable and things that can happen. just don't make the trauma thing too repetitive. characters are well written but they have started to feel a little one dimensional. they are still great, but just a little too one track. world is being explored extensively. and I am loving it. keep up the good work author.