ASOIAF : Creed

Finally, something that I was trying to find. Good luck, author.

This a good ff ,I love it ................................... .....................................................................

Finalmente uma história de game of thrones com um Jon Snow, mais focado, inteligente, e com um sistema o transformando em um guerreiro fenomenal, e com uma mente analítica. Ainda mantém seu carácter taciturno e profundo.. ao descobrir a verdade de seu nascimento e ao ir para a muralha conhecer seu ancião.. veremos que caminho ele irá tomar.

Great so far author keep it up I hope jon gets his own dragons that are separate from Daenerys

I really like the story, especially a crossover between GOT and AC...........................................................................

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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I just love the story. Even if it has a system, it is one of if not the best system fics I have ever read. Jon is written really well, the interactions seem legit, and the story has a good pace not too fast, but not slow enough to make it boring. Chapter length is good. On the point of grammar, I can’t judge that since I’m not a native speaker. All in all, really good. It is, in any case, worth a try. And please don’t drop the story it would be such a waste of a great story.