Kealen Silvanor:The founder(Asiof)
Author: Abdiqadir_Abukar
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Kaelen Silvanor, originally Elias Vance, an engineer and physicist from our world, was reborn as an ageless Ael'athar. Driven by the personal goal of uniting his scattered race, he embarked on a century of intense training across Essos—mastering combat, forging, shipbuilding, and governance. Returning to Sothoryos, he now begins building a new, enduring civilization, bringing together tribes and establishing his Four Legendary Dukes to forge an empire for his people.
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Okay, it feels way too much like an AI. I like the idea, but Chapter 2 was stupid. He could’ve used his powers to change his appearance and made himself look like a Valyrian. He already knows they’re slave traders and evil with their ruthless reputation, so I don’t understand why he’s trying to get to know them. I get that he needs knowledge, but the way he’s doing it is just dumb.
AI stories always suck, and this one is no different. Don't read this because it sucks.🤮🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮
It's a fun ai read however can you please for love of all that is holy edit out or change the constant not from <phrase> but from <phrase> that is splattered throughout the fanfic like diarrhea everything is always described as not such and such but such and such it's mentally draining and irritating I've come across it in at least 50 ai novels. edit it and this would easily be 5 stars in my opinion.
waste of time mc is boring with no goal .
It's been a while since I read a good ff.
Not worth reading.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎િિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિિુુુુુુુિિિિુૌાૂૂુ્ેૈી્્
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It’s ai.
AI storys are usually bad, but this can be s slightly good but you need to Edit it thoroughly you need to add more details 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
The story is entertaining and written perfectly no major spelling mistakes and few spelling errors here and there. although the author admitted that his story is mostly written by AI it is still in my opinion a rather interesting story worthy of a read I implore you to give it a try.
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I use Google Translate. I logged in for this. It's amazing how incompetent the commentators are who give 1-2 stars to such a wonderful work. Undeservedly low ratings!!! The characters are alive! Their thoughts, thoughts, actions are not just bots around the main character, they are full-fledged individuals! It's amazing how something interesting was found among the dregs of this platform! Author, respect to you from Russia)
This fanfic is 95% AI and at most 5% author's work...
I think the people in the comments are too biased, they spewed hate just because artificial intelligence was used. Yes, there are too many descriptions in some places, but this does not mean that it is a bad story. I think those who take the comments into consideration should give it a chance. I am also currently updated and eagerly awaiting the sequel
this is a good one ........................... ..................... ................. .....................................................................