Superman: Doomsday Future

This is a translation of a very popular fanfiction. Chapters: 652 Status: Completed Author: Lost Stranger

I'm gonna be honest this story has a cool premise, and got me interested but the translation quality is really bad. It reads like a machine translation, with horrendously awkward wording, and flow. It makes it hard to read and enjoy the story, the dialogue for most characters doesn't even feel like a human who knows English is speaking. I suspect this is most likely an MTL based on the quality. I'm genuinely confused by all the five star ratings.

Behold, an actual good superman fanfiction. I honestly cannot wait for more chaps. Definitely a hidden gem.

The translation is terrible, the grammar is unreadable, the dialouge is beyond cringe and the characters especially the MC have zero personality or interest

This superman is OP af. And I love it.

Not bad. An actual good Fanfic.

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)

the story is good, everything is good. The only bad thing is the writing. The author cannot get the names right at all. Kara is Carla and Clark is Karl. I couldn't stand it anymore and stopped reading. the rest of the writing is good, but the mis-naming is infuriating.

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копия оригинала и гг наивный и тупой!!! аоаоаоаотататататаоаоаооаоаоаоаоаоаооаоаоаоаоаоаорарарарарарараоаррарараоркрарарарарарарарраркрарарарарарараррааооаоаоаоаоаоокоа

Sinceramente la historia es buena, pero es buena porque es casi una copia de superman con desbiaciones lo que la vuelve insipida y repetitiba. Creo que carece de un caracter original para el protagonista, digo si estubiera en su situacion me distanciaria totalmente de lo que grite cliche superman al repecto pero en los primeros caps ya vemos algunos muy fuertes(como la chica lois, que trabaje en el diario, los padres, la actitud heroica, etc) tambien vemos muchos cliches de situaciones misticas sin explicacion y personas o enemigos en las sombras que no se explican , imagino que se explica mas adelante pero es algo muy tipico. En cuantro a la traduccion es decente pero peresosa, no es un insulto solo que las traducciones que se realisan sin editar el modo de escritura para eliminar tropos o costumbres de otros paises generalmente no encajan o se quedan raras al traducirlas,( tropos chinos con sus actitudes y forma de vida, (no soy racista solo me es raro leer),que si los cambias en la historia seria mas llevadero),es buena la ortografia pero algunas veces el texto queda incompleto o desplasado, imagino por el sitio. Buen trabajo pero no es mi tasa de té.

How often are you going to update the novel for the rest it's great 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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I am in absolute love with this novel. Please don't stop releasing new chapters.