Martial RPG
[WPC #296 Bronze Winner]
Xie Mo can't cultivate. In the Jianghu where strength reigns Heaven and Earth, people like him aren't even an ant.
Born without a Meridian and Dantian, he faced inevitable unjust and couldn't do anything as his family and friends were mercilessly slaughtered by the Blood sect. Xie Mo lived a worthless life.
"This kind of life isn't worth living." is his final thought.
However, when he was about to take his life, a large holographic panel suddenly pops up.
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Player "Hong Xie Mo" has logged in.
level: 1
Hp: 100
Qi: 0
Qinggong: 10
Strength: 5
Intelligence: 10
Skills:
-Farming
-Knife Handling lvl 1
Warning:
The player does not have a meridian or a dantian.
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"...What..."
This is the story of a man's struggle in the cruel martial world with the help of his RPG system.
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Original novel.
The cover does not belong to me.
Hello potential readers! The story might have a rather slow pace at the start but I assure you it will get better in the later chapters. The MC is rational and somewhat bold enough to undertake paths that can improve his strength. Sadly, the RPG system given to him isn't invincible, the MC will still die and he cannot instantly exponentially grow in strength. He must strategize and struggle to survive. I would say MC is neither righteous nor evil, but he is selfish. There might be romance but there will not be a harem. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you for reading!
The Author is back at it again! Writing quality is fairly well with easy-to-understand structures and harmony of words. I often find myself picturing whatever scenes very vividly. The protagonist is one of the pragmatic types that does everything with a justification while able to take risks to grow stronger. The premise is interesting where the protagonist gains a "game-like" system that allows him to do everything an RPG character does including saving checkpoints that can only be reloaded after death(The protagonist, however, has a limited amount of lives, which he obtains from the quest, etc.). Updating stability is very firm, which I like, and the world background seems to be the typical Murim style with the cruel nature standing out more. I would recommend giving this a read and finding out if it is your cup of tea.
The writing is decent. The emotions feel raw and alive, while the descriptions are simple but easily understandable. Story Development - Still chapter 4, but there already is a story going on. The story seems interesting and unique. Character Design — Hard to say. 4 chapters are not really enough to know if the other characters are good or not, but I can assure you that the MC is good. Updating Stability — Enough said, look up his other works and you will see they update fast. World Background — Typical murim, idk whats special yet since its only, 4 chapters. Good luck Author-san!
WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing is superb, I didn't see any typos or grammar mistakes. The action is also well-thought out. This novel is still very recent, and I have no idea what the author's release schedule is. The story has just started out, but I imagine it will be interesting. (This is also my first time reading an Eastern Fantasy Novel) Character design is really nice. (I can't explain it really in depth) The world background is also a new thing for me, but it also feels very interesting! (My first time reading an Eastern Fantasy Novel)
this is my 3rd book I am reading by the author and man he does it well everytime this book MC is good not naive kind MC system seems well thought out, world building is awesome I some time feel I can see what I am reading now I feel like I should say its S_Takeshi so it must be good
The pacing feels rushed, or maybe it's just me that liked slow-paced stories better. I could feel that the story was written from the heart, but it could be better with help of an editor. You might want to read (and steal) techniques to write dialogue from other writers. All in all, I have fun reading. (≧◡≦)
(Chapter 1-10)Good setup and story so far. I see the inspiration from “Murim RPG Simulation” and “Reaper of the Drifting Moon”. Looking forward for more chapters.
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the story picks up by chapter 4 and that's when it begins to shine. the mc is smart but not the generic smart guy type, he has character to him and in some way reminds me of senku from Dr stone. the structure and Grammer of the book is really good and consistent, the paragraphs are short and easier to digest and follow, and the word that's being built in the story has a lot of promise and expectations for the future. good work on the story author this was a good read and I hope you keep up with the good writing.
Greetings, Author! Would you like to give your novel a shot at M.E.G.A.N.O.V.E.L.CO.m? please message me on discord #8992 Tim.TKS. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This is my first time reading an RPG and I am glad to say this one is my starter novel. The dialogue is so realistic yet increasingly descriptive, I can get wrapped up in their world so easily. Also, you can never go wrong with a wuxia novel!
Writing quality - It's above average to say the least. Rate of updates - Solid. Story development - The pacing is also quite good ngl. Character design - I can't find any flaws in them. World background - The kingdom building was subtle and natural, unlike the info dumps I've read in other wuxia and xianxia. Overall, the plot has potential if the author doesn't stop writing.
Good Cover √ Exciting Story √ Smart Mc √ Vivid and real world √ Amazing system that does not give everything to mc and Mc has to work for it to become stronger √ What more can I possibly say? Go read this masterpiece!