Rise of Pokemon in Beast world

Here a little help from me, anyway it doesn't sound bad. I hope ya don't give legendary in beginning making mc too powerful the power levels should be in balance

the writer have shown a world different to us. This kind of story which shows the parallel world has always been loved by the teens of my age and it includes the stuffs related to 'pokemon' which has been all time favorite since our childhood. This story is for the teens who love to watch animes and movies with actions. It is worth reading .

Not bad , although first chapter seems ordinary but i hope it gets better later on. Hope to get a good fanfic to enjoy. These days rarely see pokemon fanfic to enjoy.now just wishing to read one better. Hope writer doesn't leave it midway.

Well, then. Let's start with a simple one - the repetitive paragraphs at the end of chapters are very, VERY annoying. Secondly, it would be much more interesting for me to read about the most ordinary nameless hero, without some kind of super royal family, which, in fact, abandoned our gg to the mercy of fate. And which he will gladly accept later. God, that's a terrible stamp, I've seen it a million times in other novels. But in general, it's not bad, there is something to work on, but so far few words have been written to pass sentence.

The mysteries is good part novel, i am enjoying it a bit. Isn't too boring at least will keep you entertained. Must be good and hope author don't mess up

Author don't keep the updates slow. The story is going well. It's good to pass time the work is not too exceptional but it's still best. Hope i enjoy alot

Author still feels like newbie by the words he write but his plot seems better, at least he kept some mysteries to unearth otherwise it would have been a boring one

I like pokemon since childhood, sometimes animation feels for kids that's why i mostly read fanfics because it actually has some dark elements which animation never been able to show to us