This is the only twilight fanfiction on here that I think is actually good the rest of them are just the authors fanboying over the characters or sucking them off this is a nice change of pace I also hate twilight but I like this fanfic
3 years ago
13
ravhage
love the story so far...and i hope your dream was 30ch worth hhh
3 years ago
5
bondarant
so far so good unlike most this mc actually has some substance behind him his thoughts feelings his fears unlike most webnovel characters he is not a 10/10 perfect rigid cardboard guy he feels real and you can empathize with him
3 years ago
4
Slowest_Turtle
I really like this story. Decent writing quality, a great sense of humor, and some creativity are taking this story quite far. It's a shame it hasn't been updated in so long but I'm definitely a fan.
2 years ago
2
AnnalyciaAnne21
I really like Theo. His has real emotions, he feels real! Not like a robot who thinks he knows better than the main cast, or who wants to follow cannon but "save the day" - he has real fears, feelings and you can put yourself in his shoes.
3 years ago
2
TheOnlyAlpha
Love your fic man cant wait for more!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
3 years ago
2
Ikaris265
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY IS SO COOL I LOVE IT!!! I'M BEGGING ON MY KNEES SOBBING PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY ITS ONE OF THE BEST WRITTEN STORIES IVE READ ON WEB-NOVEL THE STORY SEEMS SO COOL AND THEO HAS A GREAT PERSONALITY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
This is the only twilight fanfiction on here that I think is actually good the rest of them are just the authors fanboying over the characters or sucking them off this is a nice change of pace I also hate twilight but I like this fanfic
love the story so far...and i hope your dream was 30ch worth hhh
so far so good unlike most this mc actually has some substance behind him his thoughts feelings his fears unlike most webnovel characters he is not a 10/10 perfect rigid cardboard guy he feels real and you can empathize with him
I really like this story. Decent writing quality, a great sense of humor, and some creativity are taking this story quite far. It's a shame it hasn't been updated in so long but I'm definitely a fan.
I really like Theo. His has real emotions, he feels real! Not like a robot who thinks he knows better than the main cast, or who wants to follow cannon but "save the day" - he has real fears, feelings and you can put yourself in his shoes.
Love your fic man cant wait for more!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY IS SO COOL I LOVE IT!!! I'M BEGGING ON MY KNEES SOBBING PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY ITS ONE OF THE BEST WRITTEN STORIES IVE READ ON WEB-NOVEL THE STORY SEEMS SO COOL AND THEO HAS A GREAT PERSONALITY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE