King in the North

very good so far. Please make sure to continue the story and add more kingdom building

good novel

i liked it, its a good history for fun, keep going e don't drop it please. ....................................................................................

Can't really enjoy this story, The format makes it a hard read. Might come back later to check if you've fixed it.

Kinda mid TBH... Here's why: Chapters often don't link up so well together. Reads like author skipped a chapter, every few chapter, but he didn't, just chose to end current scene before it was truly complete. Plus, I have a hard time with stories where MCs are super influential, like nation changing influence, at 5 YO.

I love it so far please keep updating...

The first main character was good, the second one was just plain stupid [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

2 things i didn't like is that you put too much emphasis on queen visiting the north and it's been 2 decades since mc is born the north is strong and secure they even have dragons why give taxes to south when they are getting nothing in return ???

I like it, but there are many hates in the comments, so better delete some of those because your rating will drop. asfsafsafsafsadsadasfsafsafsa

It has the lingering stench of chat GPT, but it's still pretty good. Keep at it!

It's a good FanFiction, it has some clichés, but the idea is good and not having a system is already a big positive point. …...................................................................................................................................

Theon's story was good, but then it was a complete disappointment. In some places, some things defy logic, actions for the sake of action, just so that there would be at least some event without a goal and development

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After reading 75 chapters of this book, I can share my opinion about it. I would describe it as more of a diary than a full-fledged novel, and I'll explain why later. On the positive side, I would like to note the high update rate, interesting ideas, the lack of a system and a harem, as well as the dynamic pace of narration, which is especially well suited for the web novel format. However, there are some significant drawbacks that cannot be ignored.: 1. Undisclosed characters. The main characters are very similar to each other, and they don't have any special traits that would make them unique personalities. The author paid attention only to the main character, his brother and father, while the rest of the characters remain just extras who utter phrases at general meetings. 2. Submission of information. The information in the novel is presented in the form of a report, which uses high-sounding and pompous phrases that do not make any sense. For example, the phrases of the main character's children from the university ("We are all working together to build a better future for the North, a future in which knowledge and innovation are valued above all else... They uncover the secrets of the universe and develop new technologies that will change the world... We are creating bonds of camaraderie and a common goal that will last a lifetime...") sounds very unnatural and lifeless. Instead, the author could use the point of view of one of the children to show everyday life at the university and how it affects their destinies, instead of telling about it in a dry and concise form. And this applies to many other moments in the novel. 3. High tempo. Although I said earlier that this is an advantage of the novel, it also becomes its main disadvantage. The author is in too much of a hurry, instead of stopping and revealing the characters, he can come up with some interesting new arcs, he just skips everything and skips time. No sooner have you become attached to the character than he has already died, or grown up, or simply lost his significance for the narrative. In general, this is a good novel with interesting ideas, but you need to understand that it is mainly about building a kingdom, everything else in it goes not even to the second, but to the third plan.