As the man ejaculated, countless sperm raced toward the womb.
'Ehh, where am I?' one of them wondered.
'WTF?! I'm a sperm?! How is this possible?' The sperm was shocked, but it couldn't stop. It's instinct to reach the egg, which drove it involuntarily forward.
'Forget it! I'll figure out what's going on later. Right now, I need to secure my ticket in life!'
'Although these sperm may cause some troubles, I'd win.' With determination, it focused on outsmarting its competitors to reach its destination.
After a long, hard battle, the sperm finally entered the egg.
The egg trembled slightly as if wanting to convey something.
As if it knew what the egg wanted to say, the sperm replied.
"When it comes to conception, I am the exception!"
"Because throughout ejaculation and impregnation, I alone am the born one! "
And that is how our sperm protagonist becomes a fetus.
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I'll give myself five stars, obviously.
It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.
I have to say, I wasn't expecting this story to be so fun to read. The MC is smart (but not too much), and much more patient than Yun Che. Honestly, the only thing I wish there was more of would be intereactions with known characters, but now that (spoilers to chapter 11) we are in the main continent then I believe things will only get better. The writing quality is actually quite good and there are very little grammar mistakes. Hopefully the author can keep the consistent updates, because overall this story is really good if you like ATG.
The beginning chapters from like 1-30 is really good and comical to me. But from there it goes down hill to me. It seems like at that point the author changed the story to the mc gathering women from every where he goes. I’m not interested in reading a dumb harem gathering story right now.
4.0 STARS!!!!! HE FORGOT THE 'ITS' IN THE TITLE !!
For now 3 stars for 3 incredibly well-constructed episodes. I can say that these initial chapters are the introduction to the book, like the first steps of the mc before he officially begins his story, now we just have to wait to see what the author of this fanfic brings us and if it continues with the same quality.
Atg is a story I really like. In fanfics, I see writers rewrite the story of Atg, but I don't know if no one finished it or if it's just me. Now I want to say to the author, please try to do your best and don't drop it in the middle. I have high hopes for you and give you 5 stars.
Worth reading till chapter 55 I guess. I dislike how his goals shifted. MC was really cool when he was focusing on getting stronger as a main priority but now the main priority of his has shifted to bang every woman with a screentime as long as they are not flat. I am not interested in reading smut. I think this is a good point to quit.
This ATG fanfic is so good that it might be the most entertaining thing I have read in recent memory. This is a good Crack fic with an interesting plot. Hopefully, the story keeps entertaining me as it has so far.
I have mixed feelings about this fanfiction. The beginning was great and promising, but the quality has deteriorated. The author leans toward a MC with a lot of humor and clichés, with a harem and well-written relationships, it's still enjoyable if you have nothing to read. And don't get me wrong, the author did a good job, but it's either because he's a beginner, or he doesn't know how to express his character the MC, or he's a fan of authors who like to mislead their readers by offering them a powerful MC but nerfs him because they lack writing talent or nerf him to increase the volume of the novel. Honestly, I don't understand what the author is trying to do, for example, at the beginning, he gives the MC a cultivation speed worthy of a genius, but then starts nerfing it little by little. He's already increasing the small realm from 10 to 13, and the three small realm are really taking his time of cultivation and delays him too much, putting him in dangerous situations for no reason. Even the technique he created it by refining the 78 Profound Entrances, which took him about a third of the novel, is ultimately just a technique that allows him to temporarily increase his power level, with collateral and harmful damage. I'll be honest, i couldn't make it past 100 chapters. I'm just giving my opinion on a fanfiction that i was hoping to keep up for a while, but i wish the author good luck in his work and success in this field. PS: English is not my first language, so i can't give my opinion on the grammar and vocabulary of the novel.
Great book for the first 50 chapters before the quality drops significantly. As of the Frozen Cloud Immortal Palace, the focus shifts from his genius and new inventions to harem, sex, and more harem. He actually tries to turn the sect of 2000 women into his harem and that's when my opinion of this book hit an all time low. I just wished the author would have stayed consistent and not changed the focus of the book.
5 stars it's good, but too much women destroying the plot. And MC like to cook
Me gusta mucho hasta ahora y he leído muchos fanfics de atg Bro ,mas ,más,más,más,más capítulos 😃😸👍👍👍😸😸😸👍😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸😸😸👍😸
5 Stars just because the MC is too frightening
With out much spoilers: If you're looking for a good ATG+Harem fanfic, you came to the right place. This fanfic is one of the best out there, no water soups but fulled with meats. The story didn't go too fast nor slow, just right. And for the harems they have reasons and developed to be, not like MC going to a market and picking some cabbages. Lastly, Writer listens and communicates with readers. That's already a good sign for you. 9/10 would recommend. [img=recommend]