returning with a [SSS-grade] talent

hello there, obligatory author review here. I personally like reading the reincarnation game system novel, and thought I could give it a try. And now that I have done a couple of chapters I realize that I really enjoy writing this novel. I hope you guys can enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it even though my grammar may not always be the best. p.s. ignore my score I don't know how to rate my own work.

Its good for a first time author. I just wanted to ask that how did he travel to so many dungeons in phase 1. Were there so many dungeons in his own city or did he fly from one place to other in span of just 3 months or is there a different world in the oblesiks where he goes shopping and hunting . plz clarify . Overall the your idea is great and a little romance with his aids will not hurt

I quite enjoyed reading this but the grammar could be seriously improved either through effort or a app but overall the story is quite good but maybe go into a little more detail about what he did to get to certain points and definitely go into more detail for battles as they have been rather lacklustre so far and the main character has hardly faced any hardships which can spice up the story

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So far it is good. All of the stats are consistent and writing quality is consistent. It is very fast paced within these first chapters but I am assuming that it will slow down once it hits the next phase which is highlighted in the intro. I look forward to the other world characters. I hope this can have the same thought and inventiveness that rebirth of the rainbow mage has. Look forward to the next chapters.

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