MARVEL: The Guardian chosen by the Moon

Hey everyone, a little self-criticism and a quick message. I'm French, so English isn't my strong suit—please be indulgent with that. I welcome all criticism, whether positive or negative, so feel free to post it so I can see where to improve. Finally, I've already abandoned this story once before—rest assured, I won't be doing that again anytime soon!

I love the book, some things can use a little work, but I hope to see this book go on far many more chapters, I’ll be sending power stones when mine restock

I thought you died welcome back to the land of the living this is sooo good update soon loved it it’s great

I love this plz moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i like it it's a good fanfic i want moooooooooore

The idea for the story is fascinating. So far the story does not fail to keep my interest. If possible, please keep updating, I can’t wait to read more.

only 2 chapters in and i can tell itll be a boring snoozefest with absolutely nothing new to it. want an mc who won't change shit from canon? how about a retarded "dark entity" that'll be fucking with him the entire story... totally original right? 🙄 how about his secret that every transmigrator takes to their grave being revealed the second he steps into Asgard? Literally all in the first 4 fucking chapters. It's quite shit...

It’s a very good book and I been looking for a good Jack Frost fanfic for a while and finally found one I can’t wait to red more.

I like this story a lot and honestly anything I say will just take away from the book itself. Read it. This is how crossover fanfics should be.

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........................................................................................ i dont know what to say .............. i like it ...

The concept is good But the writing seems soulless I mean it's good but not much There are lots of smal issue there as well like the ancient one will act for dimensions misleads

Greate story nice twist could.