MARVEL: The Guardian chosen by the Moon

Hey everyone, a little self-criticism and a quick message. I'm French, so English isn't my strong suit—please be indulgent with that. I welcome all criticism, whether positive or negative, so feel free to post it so I can see where to improve. Finally, I've already abandoned this story once before—rest assured, I won't be doing that again anytime soon!

I love the book, some things can use a little work, but I hope to see this book go on far many more chapters, I’ll be sending power stones when mine restock

I thought you died welcome back to the land of the living this is sooo good update soon loved it it’s great

I love this plz moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i like it it's a good fanfic i want moooooooooore

The idea for the story is fascinating. So far the story does not fail to keep my interest. If possible, please keep updating, I can’t wait to read more.

It’s a very good book and I been looking for a good Jack Frost fanfic for a while and finally found one I can’t wait to red more.

only 2 chapters in and i can tell itll be a boring snoozefest with absolutely nothing new to it. want an mc who won't change shit from canon? how about a retarded "dark entity" that'll be fucking with him the entire story... totally original right? 🙄 how about his secret that every transmigrator takes to their grave being revealed the second he steps into Asgard? Literally all in the first 4 fucking chapters. It's quite shit...

I like this story a lot and honestly anything I say will just take away from the book itself. Read it. This is how crossover fanfics should be.

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The concept is good But the writing seems soulless I mean it's good but not much There are lots of smal issue there as well like the ancient one will act for dimensions misleads

Greate story nice twist could.

Me gusta como se esta desarrollando la historia espero siga así y no la abandonen tiene bastante potencial que dar, sería chevere que le den siertas avilidades de otros guardianes al menos los compatible