When a young man from our world is sent with a purpose. He will then try to find his place in this impossible reality but so familiar while being a character of children's tale.
the "cinematic universe of marvel" and " Rise of the Guardians" belong to their respective rights holders, I own nothing
Hey everyone, a little self-criticism and a quick message. I'm French, so English isn't my strong suit—please be indulgent with that. I welcome all criticism, whether positive or negative, so feel free to post it so I can see where to improve. Finally, I've already abandoned this story once before—rest assured, I won't be doing that again anytime soon!
The idea for the story is fascinating. So far the story does not fail to keep my interest. If possible, please keep updating, I can’t wait to read more.
i like it it's a good fanfic i want moooooooooore
I love this plz moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
f.....u......c....k.......... it......i.s. boring
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The story is cool, it starts well, the writing style can still improve, at least the descriptions are well done and visualize well, except at certain times when it's a bit weird but we'll see later what happens, this is just the beginning
why are conversations in italics bro. just do this. "im jack frost" instead of italics
.You write quite nicely. The concept of the story is new to me. I look forward to seeing what you have planned for the future. Keep it up. .
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