The interactions doenst feel good, it is like you are forcing them every step also the pacing is stremelly fast, this is not the kind of story I would enjoy reading and it is not because of the content it is because of the way you wrote it. since the idea has potencia and I will keep it on the Library and check later if you improve and I may change my review.
The interactions doenst feel good, it is like you are forcing them every step also the pacing is stremelly fast, this is not the kind of story I would enjoy reading and it is not because of the content it is because of the way you wrote it. since the idea has potencia and I will keep it on the Library and check later if you improve and I may change my review.