Being Vegito after defusion

For prospective readers. Basically the situation is this. Bulma and Chichi are with Vegeta and Goku respectively. Vegito has memories of being with them but has no feelings towards either, just appreciating towards their beauty and that's it. To some this is Ntr, but it is not since Vegito was never in love with them. Hopefully this cleared it up to those who are thinking of reading or not. Cheers!

Well that's a really good Dragon ball Z/Super fanfic. Some say that some chapter are repeating the same thing but I read everything at once and I can say that's wrong. One thing that might have surprised the readers could have the focus on the psychological part of the character, doing what DBS did but better (but who can do worse than DBS ?), while not having any fight and focusing one the characters mindsets giving a new perspective of them. That's the story of someone trying to find his place in a universe where he did not have one. I really like that story and hope it will continue. (PS that'smy first review of a novel so I don't know if I did it right so please comment)

This is actually really good. OP in Dragon Ball done right, and not as a powerwank that has the MC one-shot everything and ends in 20 chapters. It has well-written slice-of-life and character interactions that will ensure the fanfic can last more than 100K words, and probably as many as 300K - while also being well-paced so it doesn't feel like a drag. So far, there's no BS for how everyone (namely Goku and Vegeta) has caught up to - or is keeping up with - the MC, yet they are also not sidelined. Naturally as Vegito has much more potential than Goku and Vegeta does, he is growing at a rate that puts others to shame and unlocking new transformations, but not unreasonably so. He's being smart - helping the Z-fighters get strong enough that he doesn't have to deal with every problem by himself and taking advantage of meta-knowledge to come up with techniques and transformations, but also being careful of not going overboard. Unlike the Z-fighters, he's 'cleaning up' after fixing problems (I won't divulge to avoid spoilers), which I quite enjoy seeing. Likewise, not everything is about the main characters like Goku, Vegeta, Bulma, Krillin, Gohan and Piccolo - he interacts with and helps others, which I enjoy, as well as interacting with normal people occasionally in day-to-day life. What's more, the people actually feel like people. They each have their own thoughts, feelings, emotions and opinions - separate from one another. They don't just all go along with what the main Z-fighters do. They also have very human interactions - not always telling the truth (yet not maliciously), and disagreeing on matters and wanting to take different approaches to the same matter, or even reacting unreasonably, yet not unrealistically - like a human would. Overall, It's very enjoyable and I'd recommend giving it a try.

I dont want to bash this fic but a lot of it feels so repetitive, you have like 3 chapters repeating the same points. And making a wife for him is just sad, so much potential and we get Chima... a fushion between bulma and chichi because they thought he was lonely. It just feels mostly written by AI as well.

Decent fic but the author wrote some creepy shit halfway through. He had bulma and chichi fuse to create new life with their memories, whose sole purpose was to be vegitos girlfriend. Beyond messed up considering they did this knowing the fusion would have memories of both their lives and the families they’d be missing. On top of the fact thst the fusion would be be made knowing its whole purpose is to be vegitos gf and had no other reason to be made.

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Its an okay story. If it was written by a different author, it would probably be a really good story. But unfortunately, it was written by this author. And this author thinks repeating the same lines eighty five time each is the best way to write. I won't even get into the heavily morally fucked up Bulma and Chi-Chi fusion, the problem with this novel comes directly from the Author's use of mindless repetition. EVERYTHING, and I mean, EVERYTHING, Vegito says, does or feels must be repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated and repeated. Repetition is an EXTREMELY useful writing tool, but this Mfer thinks that just means Copy/Paste everything in his book and it will somehow be a better book. My god man, just stop repeating EVERYTHING in your book.

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Normally I give non-System stories at least 2-3 stars but not this one. The MC is a fusion of some of the worst character traits of modern day white guys. Total b'+tch, no personality and loves to talk about the most trite things imaginable. This Vegito is an insult to the original character and Sayians and the DB universe as a whole.

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True Peak fiction, amazing interactions and Power ups. No stupid Harem seeking or Power intoxication, focuses more on slice of life and the building relationships. Pls dont drip and continue.

Excellent work I liked the novel and how protagonist has been portrayed

By far the best DBZ fanfic I've read. The character interactions the world building, amazing. Best of all is how it focuses on the world around them, compared to other works where its just fighting and power levels, this feels more real and genuine. Oh, and the romance is genuinely the best I've scene. I like how you build him up, the philosophical views absolutely amazing. Great job author.

Probably the novel i most dreamed about reading . I loved the way Vegito is portrayed and is being conscious about these memories he now possesses.