YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Author's shameless review: Dang I'm already on my third novel... I always enjoyed yugioh even when I was just a child. It was not until recently that I finally return to it and what can I say, it was a blast. So I might as well try to create a decent enough story am I right? Anyway, I hope you have a fun time reading!

Book is good now make more chapters plez me bored

FINALLY a decent YuGiOh fanfic with a female mc that actually duels rather than romances almost every male character in the work...

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i think new cards appearance in old timeline will simply broke the balance.

The duels are good, and the writing is pretty good too. However, what really bothers me is the MC's personality. The whole shy, withdrawn, and soft-spoken thing was alright in the beginning, but became annoying later on. But what REALLY bothers me, is that the MC is helpless. She'll go through a duel with a powerful enemy and come out on top only to cower and think things like: "Please don't hurt me...are they going to hurt me?" It's frustrating and makes me lose all respect I have for them. And it happens pretty often.

I recently read this nice and good yugioh novel. The characters aren't overpowered but just a bit stronger than the main characters of the og series. The battles are not too fast like FTK there are tension in duel that makes you feek that the MC is losing. The pacing keeps you hooked, and the relationship between Kaiba and the main character is heartwarming that makes you say just kiss already. It's a fantastic read for anyone who loves a well-balanced, and exciting yugioh story. Can't wait for more!

Overall, it’s a very well written story which doesn’t fall into the pit traps of other isekai fanfic. I look forward to seeing it grow in the future, though admittedly I’m anxious to see how battle city is handled

Was honestly expecting a person with a future deck and cocky demeanor. This is breath of fresh air for this genre of fanfic. Really looking forward to more.

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I respect the ambition here since I think a yu gi oh fanfic would be difficult to write because of the sheer amount of description in duels and different card affects... Believe me you could become a master reader just by reading yu gi oh card affects alone.

[Writing quality] - 4/5: Some mistakes but it doesn't interfere often. Stability of updates] - 5/5: I honestly don't care of this, as long as the story is set. [Story Development] - Pretty generic honestly, but it's honestly fun to read despite it's simplicity and the games are pretty much readable and not overcomplicated. [Character design] - 5/5: I'll leave this alone, because the character is an accurate depiction of most of us who suffer from fear of social interaction. The character would also become a force to be reckoned with despite her social skills. [World Background] - 5/5: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting.

the author does a very good job keeping cards and card uses in mind not to mention there general worth at that time vs usefulness. overall I'd say it is an amazing Yu-Gi-Oh based fanfic that does the world and characters right.