Amazing story. Always keep you on the edge of your seat. Such good character development and world building. The first person narrative is really immersive and imaginative. Overall a good story to read. I'd recommend this to my friends.!!!
3 years ago
1
Dhava_sakthi
Supercalifragilisticespialitpcious! Fascinating story. Must read!!! Character development and world building skills are off the charts. Grammar could be better. Please continue the story. Waiting for chapter 2.
3 years ago
1
DaoistF1HwLb
The story is fascinating! The character development is brilliant. But you need to improve your grammar. Other than that the story is good!
Amazing story. Always keep you on the edge of your seat. Such good character development and world building. The first person narrative is really immersive and imaginative. Overall a good story to read. I'd recommend this to my friends.!!!
Supercalifragilisticespialitpcious! Fascinating story. Must read!!! Character development and world building skills are off the charts. Grammar could be better. Please continue the story. Waiting for chapter 2.
The story is fascinating! The character development is brilliant. But you need to improve your grammar. Other than that the story is good!