An Oaths End

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Author: JBShelly
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Sixteen-Year-Old Syril Elmdew is ripped from his ordinary life in the town of Anzora when he witnesses a brutal murder and comes into possession of a valuable artifact. Now on the run from a corrupted government, mercenaries, and organizations bent on destroying him and his family he must come to terms with his past and uphold a deadly ancient oath.

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Washee_Washee
Washee_Washee

So the main thing that stands out here is the excellent world building which quite frankly is well developed and fleshed out over the chapters. The author's usage of indirect hints and Syril's characterization is also quite enjoyable to read. If I were to heavily scrutinize this work, the only thing which I might not be a fan of would be the simple scope of the story's world along with the relative quick pace in which new characters are introduced, making it feel a little overwhelming at times. Other than that minor personal preference, the story is one that I enjoyed and would recommend others to read.

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Little_North_Star
Little_North_Star

Good books, but its best if author split the paragraphs, it makes it easier to read[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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