A tale from the age of steam and new inventions. A Circus troupe that had a connection with the Other Side. A "banished" seventh son and the flame dancer who had forgotten their pasts. All wrapped up in a dark plot from aeons ago. Will they reach the other side of the hill? Or will they fall into the bottomless void?
Updates: At least 1 Ch/Week for now
To potential readers, this will be a long-term project, so please bear with me. I will do my utmost so that my story will be easy to understand, but also won't drop in quality. Thank you for dropping in. ( ̄▽ ̄)ノ
Overall awesome writing style and development. Quite unique and descriptive. I like the concept of your book and I can't wait to see the upcoming chapters. Good luck to the amazing author.
Man oh man is this one a pleasure to read! I honestly love this book and so far it's one of my favorites I've read on this platform. It's simple but enjoyable and it just brings a smile to your face. Not too action crazy but that's alright with I highly recommend
I always like story where there is nobles present. specially novel like this where they reincarnate in that noble family so you have my support
One quality that I like in this story is that the prose is smooth like the author wrote it with care, and the tone is lighthearted; easy to read. The author also updates very frequently, which is great for its short chapters. The pace fits the kind of novel that it is, as it focuses on the development of its characters. How the characters interact with each other feels organic, and you can empathize with them. I feel like the author's strong suit is how he writes his characters and the lighthearted tone and smooth prose that comes with it. Although so far the world background is limited, that is because there are only a few chapters so far. The worldbuilding is not as exhaustive as other works, but it doesn't have to be. One can make the mistake of turning their novel into an info dump after all.
Dang, I like how your story is well written, and how you convey the emotions through your paragraphs. I wonder how the story will pan out as it proceed.
It definitely lets your imagination take hold and enjoy. I look forward to more of it! It's not usually along my taste of reading but it is fantstical enough it grabbed my attention, I can't wait to find out more.
(Aelrix) I Like this... ALOT I find this relatable, character interaction is also spot on but what makes this story even more interesting is its excellent display of emotion the way the story can make u feel sad, relieved and etc. Is what I believe makes this book shine out brighter than most... within just 5 chapters this book has had me feel quite a variety of emotions and I thank the author for that. The character design of the book is also very interesting from what I know as the short description of the Protagonist of our story is quite informative through its use of powerful words and it's also very unique character interaction is also very realistic and I am already loving this book I cant wait for more chapters. thank you and goodbye
I have read the first few chapters of the story and the only thing I could say was perfect. Perfect for people who just want to read something casual for once. Being exposed to too much action this novel provides a soft feeling of tranquillity. Overall the novel is very descriptive I just hope that the paragraphs are a little more shorter to make it easy to read and the grammar is good too. Keep it up, author!
This story manages to give me goosebumps when emotions overwhelm the story. I really enjoyed this storyline. I hope the next chapter comes out soon, I'm looking forward to it
Interesting Premise and Amazing Pacing! What more could one ask for? In addition, the writing quality can be more on the superb side. The only downside might be the small confusion I get from some parts. Otherwise, this is what I can gather from 2 chapters.