Trash novel, don't waste time. Already given up, I won't even see comment or reviews, I just checked by so I changed the synopsis. So please don't waste your time on this thing.
I'm too tired to write 💀
Yes, no romance, no harem and great pace
this author upload 3 chap a week so a pretty good upload stability (I have gave it 5 star in everything 💀
Not that much problem in grammar as it's hardly noticeable
So give us power stone (yes, I'm trying to slide with you as I'm you co worker 💀)
2 years ago
24
SpoiledSecrets
Anyone who gives this 5 star is a liar. The grammar is horrible, and the characters are idiots. Nobody acts their age, especially the MC. He’s supposedly millions of years old, yet he acts like an idiot. Not to mention, he’s a borderline retard. He lived for that long, but doesn’t have any skills. He cant even do basic high school math.
Not to mention the hypocrisy of the MC. He complains about villains in story books acting arrogant, yet he acts the exact same way?
Anyways, like I said, whoever gives this 5 stars is either a liar, or has never read a hood novel in their life.
2 years ago
17
chaotic_1
I like this kind of novel more than anything. The mc only think about his goal and nothing else. Unlike other novel it has some back story to the character.
If you are looking for novels with evil mc i recommend reading this novel at all cost
2 years ago
14
Shadab_Arzoo
Really loved the world development there are errors here and there but it is not a big deal overall an amazing story
Living in the city has taught me to appreciate the differences between people.
2 years ago
9
Key_To
If systems and cold mcs are your cup of tea then try this one out
Although the system hasn't shown its functions for now, it,s a thing to look forward.
2 years ago
5
DaoOfEgg
All 1 star besides, Writing Quality and World Background.
2 years ago
4
Truck_Samaa
Interesting premises. I like the concept and although it still is a little early to give a review, why not help?
writing quality: Good. I mean there are errors here and there and some of the sentence structure are weird as if translated raw if that make sense.
All in all good, readable but could still be better so only 3.8 stars for that but lets round it at 4 ⭐
Story development: Like I said, I like the lore and now is still too early to judge but still 4⭐ for potential.
character development: Too early to comment on but I feel there's something lacking. Maybe it's the sentinent system for me, don't like (my Opinion only) 3⭐
Updating: Your biggest issue in this novel. You are not consistent on upload time. You have too little chapters, like no offense but if I wasn't kinda bored rn and the fact you asked to check it out, I'll barely if not don't read a 3 chapters book. wanted to give a 2 but 3 ⭐ is good too
background: Nice no complaints, its just 3 chapters was not expecting much so 4⭐
Overall: Its a good story but is lacking chapters and imo sentinent system is not my cup of tea but I love the idea and effort behind.
Hope this helps and keep it up, make sure you release more chaps and you'll definitely get a contract
2 years ago
3
nakul_shankar
If I was to summarize my opinions of this novel on one word, it would be trash. The author must have gone to a lot of trouble to fake all these five star reviews, the authors ability is truly amazing,
2 years ago
3
Usfal_Aizen
Bro this is super good! Everything id great✨🔥
2 years ago
2
Crazy_X
Already find it interesting under two chapters and the fact the MC have to go back and g through the #weaktostrong trend makes it a whole new adventure for me to read on.
Again, a nice read for one to give a try.
2 years ago
2
Bedsloth
he man, are you dropping his book ? if not when will you continue
2 years ago
2
Sunita_Arya_6868
The author is keeping on my edge of the seat and how creative thinking the author have, but characters like Ajax are really annoying to me 😳 don't kill me please
2 years ago
2
Anime_lover21
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
1
Amitabha_Vardha
Great read, fun and engaging!!!
The story, characters it’s so serious yet not really? Idk it’s fun!
100% recommend!
What are you waiting for?
Go read it!!
2 years ago
1
Dom_Fr
but how many people do you do for a while and how 🤔 man who has better suit than you
I'm too tired to write 💀 Yes, no romance, no harem and great pace this author upload 3 chap a week so a pretty good upload stability (I have gave it 5 star in everything 💀 Not that much problem in grammar as it's hardly noticeable So give us power stone (yes, I'm trying to slide with you as I'm you co worker 💀)
Anyone who gives this 5 star is a liar. The grammar is horrible, and the characters are idiots. Nobody acts their age, especially the MC. He’s supposedly millions of years old, yet he acts like an idiot. Not to mention, he’s a borderline retard. He lived for that long, but doesn’t have any skills. He cant even do basic high school math. Not to mention the hypocrisy of the MC. He complains about villains in story books acting arrogant, yet he acts the exact same way? Anyways, like I said, whoever gives this 5 stars is either a liar, or has never read a hood novel in their life.
I like this kind of novel more than anything. The mc only think about his goal and nothing else. Unlike other novel it has some back story to the character. If you are looking for novels with evil mc i recommend reading this novel at all cost
Really loved the world development there are errors here and there but it is not a big deal overall an amazing story Living in the city has taught me to appreciate the differences between people.
If systems and cold mcs are your cup of tea then try this one out Although the system hasn't shown its functions for now, it,s a thing to look forward.
All 1 star besides, Writing Quality and World Background.
Interesting premises. I like the concept and although it still is a little early to give a review, why not help? writing quality: Good. I mean there are errors here and there and some of the sentence structure are weird as if translated raw if that make sense. All in all good, readable but could still be better so only 3.8 stars for that but lets round it at 4 ⭐ Story development: Like I said, I like the lore and now is still too early to judge but still 4⭐ for potential. character development: Too early to comment on but I feel there's something lacking. Maybe it's the sentinent system for me, don't like (my Opinion only) 3⭐ Updating: Your biggest issue in this novel. You are not consistent on upload time. You have too little chapters, like no offense but if I wasn't kinda bored rn and the fact you asked to check it out, I'll barely if not don't read a 3 chapters book. wanted to give a 2 but 3 ⭐ is good too background: Nice no complaints, its just 3 chapters was not expecting much so 4⭐ Overall: Its a good story but is lacking chapters and imo sentinent system is not my cup of tea but I love the idea and effort behind. Hope this helps and keep it up, make sure you release more chaps and you'll definitely get a contract
If I was to summarize my opinions of this novel on one word, it would be trash. The author must have gone to a lot of trouble to fake all these five star reviews, the authors ability is truly amazing,
Bro this is super good! Everything id great✨🔥
Already find it interesting under two chapters and the fact the MC have to go back and g through the #weaktostrong trend makes it a whole new adventure for me to read on. Again, a nice read for one to give a try.
he man, are you dropping his book ? if not when will you continue
The author is keeping on my edge of the seat and how creative thinking the author have, but characters like Ajax are really annoying to me 😳 don't kill me please
Reveal Spoiler
Great read, fun and engaging!!! The story, characters it’s so serious yet not really? Idk it’s fun! 100% recommend! What are you waiting for? Go read it!!
but how many people do you do for a while and how 🤔 man who has better suit than you