SK Foundation: Alice in Dreamland
In an unknown place, were everything around you was white, in that place sees a small sphere of two entities mixed together and form a new world for them to dwell in, it's their dreamland. As soon as their story started, it became a complex love story of many people mingle together.
In Zane's hometown, Shinjuku, here lies a loner who wanted to know the meaning of his life and what's worth to keep on living. Not knowing whether this world is a fabricated story or just a blissful dream to wake up from. Ever since he met Alice, his life turned backwards and became worthwhile to live once again.
Will Zane be able to find what he sought in his life? Better check it out and read now reader.
Cover not mine, here is the link of the photo and credits to the owner, if you are the creator and want me to remove it, please contact me on discord: Zane Mitsuishi#5480
This story is great as I haven't read any story about person living an ordinary life when most of his colleagues are successful... Its great how he finally found what he wants
The writing lacks a bit, but a previous review said English wasn't your primary language so It's amazing to see you try so hard ✊🏾. You did great The story development is also a bit lacking for example the transition between days or places, but aside that, it's great. Character introductions and designs are good 👍🏾. All I can say is: "You're doing great" 💯💯
A fascinating synopsis. Intriguing characters and plot flow. I love the way the author captured the life and desire of the MC. As I read through the prologue, I got instantly hooked. Great job author. Please give us more chapters.👍👍
The author primary language is not English, but that shouldn't be a reason to not read their work. It's only the first chapter and the world feels pretty great for someone who didn't read his previous work. Other than the minor grammar/structure of the story, It's pretty good, definitely worth a read.