The broken string of fate
Author: Aish1122
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The castle of 1567 which have a mystery about the king and queen deaths . year 2022(present year) the castle is now considered a tourist place ,one day a boy and a girl entered the castle . The castle have a stone placed at the center of the castle which had a legend that when the king and queen will place their hands on that stone they could see their past lives...what happens when they see their past lives ?, what mystery will unravel???Read my novel to see what happens next!!!
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Hello i am writting this from japan loving you novel , when i first read this i thought it must be a professional writer but i checked and this is your first work i cant believe this , keep writting more , sorry for my bad english . I hope that you win this ✊️✊️✊️
와우 Aish1122, 나는 당신의 소설을 사랑합니다, 내 친구가 나에게 그것을 추천했고, 내 친구는 그것이 그녀가 읽은 최고의 소설이라고 말해서 내가 한 번 해봐야겠다고 생각했습니다. 그리고 여기 내가 말 그대로 내가 가진 최고의 소설입니다. 읽고 , 그리고 11 장의 트위스트 는 오 , 나는 당신 의 소설 과 완전히 사랑 에 빠졌습 니다 . 한국의 다음 챕터를 기다리며
WOW 😍😍😍🥳🥳🥳you literally decided to add more to the story , oh i cant belive it , thank you sooooo much AISH1122 . this is the best thing that happened today , i was sooooo sad thinking that the broken string of fate ended , but today i saw a notification about the 10 chapter and I just read it , it made me sooo delighted..... i wish you win this competition you really deserve it , you are already a winner for me. i want to read your book in the future too , i wish that you become a novelist in the future and publish your book too...
WOW what a twist i didnt expect that , i am shocked what will happen when they return to the present , my god what an imagination you have ,i am your fan for life now , I mean i dont have words , i just read the 9th chapter and i am really shocked right now so i just dont know what to say , 9th chaper was great i love it but i am sad that its going to end soon as the mystery is solved ,pls write the story a little longer , i am sure that you can add more to the story pls i dont want it to end so soon
wow what a concept , now its the main day year 1623 i cant wait to see what happened and how they both died ... its really the best novel ever ,you"ve kept it so hidden that till now i dont know who could be the killer i just cant figure it out ,great novel loving it👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️
amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️
amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️
amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️ Very nice aish
amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️
my God , i m overwhelmed , surely u r the best, i m ur nd only ur fan 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
After a very long time I have come across a story like this..i like it a lot..i am your fan now..keep writing..i am now keen to know what happened next....all the best buddy...
oh my god this is literally the best fantasy novel i have ever read i love this after a long time i got attracted to a novel , pls write more soon i cant wait ,seriously i am a fan now you should write more.
Excellent work.. excellent thinking ...amazing plot... twists and turns were beyond imagination...i really wish you win this competition as u deserve to win..no one can believe it's your first novel..all the good wishes your way my dear .❤️❤️❤️
the best novel till date i read, actually nw i nd my lots of friends waiting second part of it, really it's amazing
Thank you for all of your wishes , and considering all humble requests I have decided to continue with this particular story and release a second novel , I will try to publish it as soon as possible . Thank you .