The broken string of fate

amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️

amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️ Very nice aish

After a very long time I have come across a story like this..i like it a lot..i am your fan now..keep writing..i am now keen to know what happened next....all the best buddy...

WOW 😍😍😍🥳🥳🥳you literally decided to add more to the story , oh i cant belive it , thank you sooooo much AISH1122 . this is the best thing that happened today , i was sooooo sad thinking that the broken string of fate ended , but today i saw a notification about the 10 chapter and I just read it , it made me sooo delighted..... i wish you win this competition you really deserve it , you are already a winner for me. i want to read your book in the future too , i wish that you become a novelist in the future and publish your book too...

oh my god this is literally the best fantasy novel i have ever read i love this after a long time i got attracted to a novel , pls write more soon i cant wait ,seriously i am a fan now you should write more.

amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️

my God , i m overwhelmed , surely u r the best, i m ur nd only ur fan 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

amazing work Aish...newest chapter is better than the previous one..and so is your novel ...story is going very strong..keep it up..all the very best for your future .❤️❤️❤️

WOW what a twist i didnt expect that , i am shocked what will happen when they return to the present , my god what an imagination you have ,i am your fan for life now , I mean i dont have words , i just read the 9th chapter and i am really shocked right now so i just dont know what to say , 9th chaper was great i love it but i am sad that its going to end soon as the mystery is solved ,pls write the story a little longer , i am sure that you can add more to the story pls i dont want it to end so soon

Hello i am writting this from japan loving you novel , when i first read this i thought it must be a professional writer but i checked and this is your first work i cant believe this , keep writting more , sorry for my bad english . I hope that you win this ✊️✊️✊️

와우 Aish1122, 나는 당신의 소설을 사랑합니다, 내 친구가 나에게 그것을 추천했고, 내 친구는 그것이 그녀가 읽은 최고의 소설이라고 말해서 내가 한 번 해봐야겠다고 생각했습니다. 그리고 여기 내가 말 그대로 내가 가진 최고의 소설입니다. 읽고 , 그리고 11 장의 트위스트 는 오 , 나는 당신 의 소설 과 완전히 사랑 에 빠졌습 니다 . 한국의 다음 챕터를 기다리며

wow what a concept , now its the main day year 1623 i cant wait to see what happened and how they both died ... its really the best novel ever ,you"ve kept it so hidden that till now i dont know who could be the killer i just cant figure it out ,great novel loving it👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️

what a plot , wonderful story with remarkable twists , i am eagerly waiting for next chapter , I can say ,that it is great writing beyond appreciation ," dear AISH one day u will definitely be the best writer of the world , nd ur time is coming very soon

你好，我是来自中国的方冷，我真的很喜欢你的小说，请给我们第二部分，我很想在这之后阅读，不仅我，我所有来自中国的朋友也想读这本书，所以请多写点我太上瘾了当你发布下一章时我一直在等待你的小说，今天我收到通知说它已经完成了我真的很震惊，爱你的小说......💜💜💜💜💜♥️♥️♥️♥️等不及了你的下一个项目...