The translation is perhaps either from Google Translate or Machine translate.
It is so bad.
The flow of the story was wacky, the MC immediately tries(?) to question the system in an idiotic way.
That was from chapter 1. I couldn't continue reading. I'm sorry
3 years ago
3
hde
typical chinese garbage
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2 years ago
0
syrus0star
the writing plot and in general the pacing of the store is absolute garbage couldn't even get past half of the first chapter and already wanted to kill myself
The translation is perhaps either from Google Translate or Machine translate. It is so bad. The flow of the story was wacky, the MC immediately tries(?) to question the system in an idiotic way. That was from chapter 1. I couldn't continue reading. I'm sorry
typical chinese garbage hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
didn't read 2 paragraphs and dropped . . . . . . . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like all of your fanfic if you can update this fanfic the most preciated thank you for all your work appreciate[img=recommend][img=recommend]
the writing plot and in general the pacing of the store is absolute garbage couldn't even get past half of the first chapter and already wanted to kill myself
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