An average guy, with an average life, dies while playing an RPG game. Then he opens his eyes again, in a show he had grown up with. Exciting, right? Well, he wasn’t a Saiyan, he was Yamcha, the punching bag of punching bags. But what are these screens above everyone’s heads, showing levels?
Follow his journey as he tries to maneuver himself around the dangerous world of Dragon Ball. With the Gamer Interface by his side.
+18 CHAPTERS?? HAREM??? N18 WAIFU??? ...........................................................................................................................
This is pure gold and you should read this if you're a dbz fan. The characters are respected and are perfectly written. The MC has a good personnality and fit really well in the story. there is different POV which are very well done and add a lot to the story. The story is thrilling and you wont regret reading it, this is a masterclass.
Very good novel. The only bad thing is that there are few chapters, I need about 200.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
brother come back we miss you and you kinda left off at a weird spot
I'm still early on in the story, however already a lot of problems. Seems like the author doesn't understand how the Gamer abilities work - e.g. Gamer's Mind and Gamer's Body are at max level, but MC still has extreme pain, actual broken limbs, etc. The other problem is numeric stats and rarity-classified (e.g. common, rare, legendary) items that boost stats - as an example, a sword gives +5 Str or something. Early on that's fine, but later on when we're at super saiyan levels, are you going to have +1million str for items? That's a writing trap just waiting to happen.
Are you okay author ? You stopped writing suddenly that it's worrying. If it would be possible to just have a 'I'm Okay'.
I'm just passing here, to drop this image :3
Harem please ..............................................................................................................................................
I rarely write reviews so idk what to really say, but had to after seeing that this fanfic is only 1 review from 10. After such a long time I found a decent dbz fanfic, was looking for one for a while now, so far as of chapter 27 this is pretty fire, the mc is pretty nice overall, the power growth and development is also nice, not to fast not to slow, and speaking of characters though, what happened to bulma, she became a yandere basically lol,but I like it tbh
Can only hope this novel comes back one day, it's been sitting in my library for a while now but it looks like it's been dropped for quite a while This was one of the more enjoyable DBZ fanfics I read
The only problem I have is updates. The author had something good. Will assume he is dead at this point. He hasn't uploaded it in a while. So don't read if you don't like it incomplete. romance and action are pretty good. The main girl is Bolma and seems to be one girl so far. I was up to date. I am making this review since he won't update it. Making this the only review as if it is finished.
will you continue the story? -----------
Really good and among the best DB/DBZ fanfics I've read but like all the best ones...I'm afraid it might be dropped, I just realized it hasn't been updated in while. I like that the MC isn't naive though he could definitely use some more points in intelligence
I like the story its intereszing but will there be romance???
Review at ch 59 (upto date) One of the best DBZ gf I've read The MC is smart and his interaction with others are well written Also the various POVs are of the right amount and fluid I like the way he has developed from ch1 Highly Recommended