Not bad
The grammar is a bit weird at times but its fluid enough nothing special though.
The updates are fair once a day is pretty valid.
Story dev. is amazing not gonna lie the pacing is soo fast and it moves foward soo well but not in a way where you think they are moving too fast lol.
Character design is lacking because you havent really described their looks
World background so far is a 9/10
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Amazin_Nothingness
9/10 but ill give u 5 stars im looking foward to the future of the space travel the character desings arent really described but this takes place in the real world ig so its no big deal
Not bad The grammar is a bit weird at times but its fluid enough nothing special though. The updates are fair once a day is pretty valid. Story dev. is amazing not gonna lie the pacing is soo fast and it moves foward soo well but not in a way where you think they are moving too fast lol. Character design is lacking because you havent really described their looks World background so far is a 9/10
9/10 but ill give u 5 stars im looking foward to the future of the space travel the character desings arent really described but this takes place in the real world ig so its no big deal