The MC of this story is Atesh. He was born in a world of magic and as a child, he dreamed to be a Magus, a title given to the greatest mage.
He lived with this dream until the age when his affinity was tested so that he could pursue his ambition and dream.
Fate was a cruel lady. Atesh wasn't destinated to be a Magus. The result during the affinity testing shocked him to no extend. As a result, he blacked out.
But, deep inside him, there was a thing that was more powerful than the wicked fate, the desire and revenge in his soul. He being blacked out made this caged soul, come out.
This changed the life of the normal boy called Atesh and changed his fate to die.
Who or what was that thing? What happened to Atesh? What was the result of affinity test?
Read the novel to find out.
Follow me, the author, in this wonderful adventure of the new Atesh as he paves a name of his own in the world and the universe, uncovering secrets of the world, getting revenge and much more...
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Author here,
Hi,
This is my first novel. So, please excuse my grammatical errors. I know the first chapters may be boring but I will try my best to make them enjoyable when I get enough experience by writing them.
To contact me Discord me at NanotechPikachu#6406
For ideas, queries etc
Plz, be patient enough to read this poor soul's book.
I am not writing this book for money.
I would like if you donate to me. If you didn't also, it's not a problem.
Discord link
https://discord.gg/keCdeXMpGJ
Plz do join and make it s,uccessful!
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This book cover is created by me with the help of Mathepid. So, credit to her.
Thnx
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Author here. I know that I overdid it by giving 5 stars. There are lot of grammer mistakes in the chapters so readers please forgive me for that. I am not well versed in English. I hope you all support me by voting and giving Powerstones. I will try to make this novel more entertaining. Thnx
I find your narration skills good. The way your story is developing is perfect... Plot also has so much potential and I find your story interesting.. keep going buddy.
The book was the most fascinating I've ever read. The characters are superbly portrayed, the language choice is fantastic, and the plot is surprising. Every chapter has a shocking turn in it. The process of reading never ends. I want to read this book through to its wonderful end. You must read this book or you'll get addicted. devoted author😋💖
Writing quality needs to be improved but concept and plot are interesting and characters and world background are well described and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍
Even though it is not a typical genre I go for, I liked it a lot. The plot is intriguing. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
The consept and plot setting is nice, Author has good sense of narration and I loved the characters settings too❤️👍all the best author. [img=recommend]
The story is interesting and the story development is also good. The author did a good job in portraying well. Overall, it's a book worth a read. Keep up the good author. Fighting !!!!!
Absolutely love the story plots and the ideas! [img=update]
the author cleaned up the first 30 chapters and it made a huge difference I have not read the original chapters however after the cleaned up chapters were finished I could see the difference in quality. up until the end of the first volume the story is riveting appears to have a clear direction and has excellent characterization. starting with the second volume the author became more and more insecure and so continuously asks the readers if he's doing okay. At this point (the second volume)the story becomes a different novel still very creative but a bit more chaotic , all the way up to the paywall the chapters get shorter and half filled with 5-7 author notes and requests for donations. the decrease in description and character development leads to a short summary of the books action, replacing immersive story with a bland digest version. I made it to ch 71 before I stopped, perhaps it improved later. but my review is an average chapter length.
Dropped within 13 chapters. The story is too cliche for me, if you can make it past 15 chapters, you might like the story and can continue it.
Honestly Im enjoying it so far keep ip the good work😀
A very good novel with a lot of potential, and a really good author at writing, the story is on the right track. I hope that it continues with this rhythm and that it does not end halfway like many other stories. GOOD LUCK!!! KEEP IT UP!!!
just for curiosity why did you not accept the contract?
Wow!, This book is simply amazing, I really do love the narrative technique, the story line and the characters design... I give the writer a 10 out of 10... keep up with the good work author 😊
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