Fight for the throne (THE MORNING STAR 一揽子清单)
I didn't know why but I wished Zack was here and remembering what he told me about the ghost got me more tensed.
I then felt asif someone was standing behind me and had the sudden huge to turn around
' one two three four five ... ' I counted to ten inwardly and immediately I hit ten , I turned to find a pair of silver eyes staring at me , my hands began to shake and I dropped my phone
" GHOST " i screamed
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During the period of war in hell a prophecy is given of a child born with parents from both the witches and demon beings who are in enmity
The birth of this child bring problem, suffering and difficulties to the lives of both parents.After many years , and after the arrival of the morning star Zack, things slowly begins to fall into place but what would happen when he falls in love with the child of prophecy
Especially now that their enemies have joined force's in other to see their end
I'll be releasing minimum of two and maximum of three chapters a day
stay tuned
# TRIGGER WARNING
I love the story lines and the character, the character I really love is Zack. The only thing that was off was just the absence of the use of capital letters at the sentence beginning. Apart from that, it was a great story. Please keep updating
shameless author here 🤭 this is actually my first book ever and may have a lot of grammatical mistakes which have tried correcting, I'll ask to give it a try if you want but if you don't 👇
Good. An evocative story, with straightforward language. very much deserves to stay on the reading list. Excited for the author... Hopefully the hard work won't be in vain
The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!
Wow that's a well developed story. Even I write do check it out
It starts off with an interesting pemise and builds up to the mystery surrounding lucy and her mother. The story even has magical elements that I didn't expect to see at all, so this should be pretty interesting........try using more dialoue and consistently sticking to one perspective to enhance your flow.
The story is good, word building is good, grammar and spelling, everything is good
I feel like the main downside to this story is the writing quality. Some words seem off because the characters are screaming/shouting them but they are lowercase, and it kinda makes the scene confusing, but other than that, this book is really good! I like the premise and other than grammar it seems pretty well written. I'm not sure if it's finished cos the last chapter was updated a year ago but good job!
Really good book,am eagerly waiting for the next chapters.