Heroes...they all miss the bigger picture. They conform to society, they limit themselves. I'm tired of this. I have been given a chance. I too shall be a hero...but not like them. Beware villains...the Evening Bell has tolled thy name...and the world shall know: the Assassin has risen from the grave. First-person OC (not SI).
Excellent premise and MC character growth. Amazing new take and perspective in the MHA world. An imperfect but rational MC that is relatable. A writer that has quite good grammar and a decent vocabulary as opposed to most plebs on this site. To put it simply, this story is an absolute gem and I hope it continues!
Okay here's my unbiased...well maybe a 'little' biased review: 1. Anything fate related is good, and the gritty dark fate verse and bnha is gold love it. 2. The story doesn't revolve around the plot and focus on an original plot of its own focusing on the dark parts of society. 3. Great story telling and above average grammar.
I actually follow the story on ff net, it's well written, a bit slow but it got an interesting concept (team jiro) . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Among trash I can finally say I have found treasure, well done! With your writing quality and the way you can write a story, this can very well be one of the top tier fanfics, please do not stop, and continue this endeavor to the very end! Bravo!
it's really good , just read it.
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really good so far, only complaint i have are that the pov switches can be a little confusing but it doesn't take away from the story at all
This fanfic, in my opinion is godly work. Easily one of the best fanfics I've read. Only suggestion would be for the mc to get more interactions with heros like eraserhead or All might. Maybe even be brought into UA.
I loved it. though hope you update a little faster. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ........ .. .. ... ... ... .. ...... .. .
This is a hard, cold story icl to you author keep it up im excited for the more chapters as the main character and the whole background of this is so good literal goosebumps every chapter
Essentially dude becomes an assassin and begins killing villains. 👍 🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖