- May God spare our souls - his eyes focused on an unknown fixed point just before he exploded and brains mixed with eye fluids.
His eyes closed, this time never to open again. Finally he was going home. After the body quickly decomposed the area returned to its usual silence. The only marks that there was life there are the clothes left by him and the smell of death that remained in the place after that day.
Life would probably continue to exist. The cycle of evolution would not stop, but there on that day, one of the most remarkable events in history took place.
The god himself died.
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Writing is really good, it's not heavy or anything, the world and the plot seem interesting with just the right amount of mysteries, and Marlon saying that nothing is free in this world was pretty impactful. Overall very good beginning though i'd have to say the switch between 1st and 3rd person are kinda confusing to me
Okay...The story reminds me of my favorite childhood story books of Professor Shonku by Satyajit Ray. The approach is amazing. The diary like little mission reports keeps you engaged. I have gone through a lot many books on this platform and this one is a new. However, it has only 2 chapters. I hope the writer will be able to follow through. Just looking for ratings for only 2 chapters puts others in a tight spot. We need more material to see where story goes. Please, finish the book. We would love to see it complete.