Feedback ~ Mistakes
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Hello...
This is me 'the author'. I have read through the comments from readers and have decided to re-edit and rewrite some of the early chapters.
L to those reading this book on pirated websites, as they may not receive the updated chapters.
After this chapter is released, I will also be creating an auxiliary chapter where readers can provide feedback on mistakes, plot holes, and any issues they may have with the story.
I plan to re-edit 1-5 chapters a day, depending on my availability. However, please note that I will not be adding any new content but instead focusing on polishing the existing material to improve the reading experience.
The daily release schedule will not be affected by this editing process, but don't expect any major changes to the story, such as Leo becoming a dragon god or the game merging with reality.
No foreshadowing intended...
1๏ธโฃ Plot Holes:
~ Chapters 1-20
~ Chapters 20-40
~ Chapters 40-60
~ Chapters 60-80
~ Chapters 80-100
~ Chapters 100-120
~ Chapters 120-140
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2๏ธโฃ Questionable decisions I've made while writing the book
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3๏ธโฃ Issues with the general story
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AN: Thank you for the feedback!
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