Love and freedom

please forgive my errors I wrote this after my part time job in the evening so I couldn't proof read I'm crying at the errors 😭 but I hope you enjoy it

HELLO HELLO! I WAS ABOUT TO READ YOUR STORY BUT I'M STILL SO BUSY! GONNA CHECK IT OUT LATERRR SO I'LL LEAVE MY REVIEW HEREEEEEE MWAPSSS!

I like the story so far, it's shows the characters relationship with each other and also their thoughts and emotions. Please keep updating I want to see what will happen next

The story is ordinary, but still has its own uniqueness, I feel bad for FL, and just hoping for her good future, keep it up, your story is amazing. You have done a great job, just a little polishing and you're all good, well done!

At first you had a lot of grammar errors but you seem to have fixed that but the story is enjoyable so far I mean having a FL with a burnt face is kinda interesting so keep it up

very good, I recommend to everyone who reads this novel is very good to pass the time and read something good por favor leiam essa novel é muito boa pra passar o tempo e ler uma boa história divertida

I can see that story has potential to grow seeing how you started and hope continue to grow as you keep writing please I hope it doesn't end up being cliche ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Hello author your book is really good it's has this like Cinderella setting but has a slight twist to it and I like how you gave Valerie good friends even when her life was bad

Very interesting story first time seeing a FL with a burnt face making the story very new and I hope to see Valerie leave a better life away from her aunt and cousin

Love the story, The world you create in few chapters really speaks a lot to the reader, please keep writing, can't wait for another chapter to see what happens next

This is actually a nice story. I like love story. Go ahead. You will do your best..............................................Thank you....