Death was supposed to be the end, wasn't it? Is this miserable life ever going to end? A story of filled with pain and suffering and perhaps a rewards. Keep reading.... the stories have just begun...
Unique story and worth reading. All characters well defined and plot is well based in near reality. Would recommend to give it a read. All other stories would seem flawed 😂😂. Coming from a novice.
2 years ago
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RealRAIsan
Amazing work... really fantastic ... getting death note vibes....
really hope you keep writing it. You will get there... the readers will eventually come. you need to work on the format a little.... everything else is just amazing... I hope you will really use this story that you have created.... and end it well... do not needlessly prolong it and make the right choice...
2 years ago
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Ahmar_Iftikhar
A really great read. Was totally immersed in the plot and the character. Loved the cliffhanger.
Cant wait to see what happens next.
The wording and character definitions really show how experienced the writer is.
Very well written.
Unique story and worth reading. All characters well defined and plot is well based in near reality. Would recommend to give it a read. All other stories would seem flawed 😂😂. Coming from a novice.
Amazing work... really fantastic ... getting death note vibes.... really hope you keep writing it. You will get there... the readers will eventually come. you need to work on the format a little.... everything else is just amazing... I hope you will really use this story that you have created.... and end it well... do not needlessly prolong it and make the right choice...
A really great read. Was totally immersed in the plot and the character. Loved the cliffhanger. Cant wait to see what happens next. The wording and character definitions really show how experienced the writer is. Very well written.