I Am The Game's Villain

A weird guy transmigrated in a Villain's body in a Hardcore Dating Sim Game. Protagonist, Heroines, Villainess, Villain! Everything is there. Are you curious about what Edward will do in that Game-World? Then read it and enjoy! If you have any questions, I am all ears!

Review after 1st part of 2nd game ended NOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time! The good: - Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic. - Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!! - 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role. - Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good: - Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective. - At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed. - With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters. One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.

I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing💯

For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism. The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality. The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?

I do not plan to insult or offend anyone, it is my opinion of the novel. The novel has potential, a good development of the world and a clear level of power developed. And there my good opinion remains, the characters feel stupid, especially the mc, to begin with he seems to doubt life at all times, he never thinks about things and does everything on "impulse", until now he has not done anything thinking , from the beginning to the current chapter, he has been told that his ex-girlfriend is alive, which is the main and only reason why he transmigrated, but until now he has not done anything to find out her whereabouts, consult with his system, goddess or not even investigate or try to find it, another example is that of the mc leaving his position as heir to the duke, there is no logic or real reasons behind that, the mc knows that they are going to remove him from his position, and for that reason he resigns a month before When he could try not to remove him, taking advantage of all the resources that the heir to Duke would have, and also ignoring his sister's clear affection for him. Another issue is the mc taking it all as a game after almost dying 2 times in a row and experiencing a death. I'll leave it there, but the more you advance, the more stupid the mc is doing.

why is mc still a wingman it is getting frustating to read

story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.

Reveal Spoiler

MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more. Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.

I know I shouldn't judge this one early, but it lacks appeals on me. No offense on this, although I'm only at chapter 6, I dont want to read the rest of the story. It's not my cup of tea.

It's good so far. But I really hope this won't be a typical cliche novel where a supposedly dangerous and psychopathic yandere obsessed with another person suddenly becomes an uwu girl for the MC and accepts any girl in his harem.

OKAY, it seems my journey ended here. Thank you for the story. I guess I don't have a choice but to accept it since I don't like your decision. It was very enjoyable to read. Thank u🫡.

Enigma Red Dungeon is the WORST arc I have ever read. This arc had to be the worst structured one, with So many POV switches with 30-40 characters put on focus simultaneously, every chapter with no link to each other. we are going from someone's tragic death, to someone wishing to create harem, to past life flashbacks, to sudden slice of life, MC doing the annoying hiding identity thing etc, so many things happening all at once. Most annoying thing that kept on happening was we are going through someone's POV story but then cut to another person in the middle of that story, by the time the novel picks up on the previous story point the reader either forgets or stops caring all together. Author please never cook an arc like this ever again.

The author attempts to deconstruct the isekai story, but it just feels like a forced and twisted mess to me. Just so you know, I only got through the first part. In the second part, two, most of the characters from the previous section do not reappear. Oh, and the MC starts going by a different name. But everything still same pattern, MC move to different school. When I began reading, I had certain expectations of this novel, as I enjoyed the MC's character and his interactions with the other characters, finding them vivid and engaging. It's enjoyable. The MC's already connection with many important character as childhood friend, except the main girl and the protaganist. Then, you get to see things from both main girl and the protaganist POV. They hanging out with the MC at school, thinking they're gonna grow and change as characters. But the author throws you for a loop, making you wonder if these are even the same people. Turns out, they stab the MC in the back. The protagonist, who was all about friendship but couldn't find the guts to back it up, turns into this monster who's all about 'collecting' girls like they're Pokémon. And the main heroine, who seemed so sweet and innocent, is actually some kind of mastermind in this weird twist. It's like everything's just being flipped around for the sake of shock. And don't even get me started on the characters who get killed off or the heroines forced into crappy arranged marriages, or the one who's a rape victim. I started reading hoping for a feel-good story, but I ended up pissed. The story just gets gorier and more depressing, turning into this total tragedy. The MC's up against a god, and the author really drives home how powerless the MC is against Zeus, who wants to make his girlfriend to become his wife. Instead of dragging the story out with more resolution, instead the author make part two with new academic story and similiar pattern from first part. The author should've just ended the first part by allowing the MC to achieve a successful revenge against those who wronged him. This make many reader satisfied with ending.