Locke is a boy who dreams of living a peaceful life with his sister, Fahrla, but this dream is torn from him when the city of Arindel is destroyed and Fahrla is taken from him by the enigmatic Straza of the Black Hand. What follows is a story of Locke's struggles to find his sister again.

World Fire

ACTION

ADVENTURE

ROMANCE

COMEDY

MAGIC

WEAKTOSTRONG

MYSTERY

DARK

FASTPACED

MULTIPLELEADS

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So I had the ch 1-3 and I’m impressed. The characters are introduced well and I loved the beginning- my favorite character so far is Big Eye, I hope to see more of him in the future. 
I also saw some capitalization and punctuation errors but overall this has huge potential in the future. 

I LOVE THIS BOOK SO MUCH I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU BLACK C. CAVIAR I LOVE YOU AND ALL OF YOUR BOOKS OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!