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Guest duo pey to thori din phle hi likhi..aur abhirika pey bhi likh chuki hu..aj kal ache dayerya aur abhirika stry bahut kam milte hey..duo ki to kaafi ache ache writers hey dear,haan limited but talented..mujhe ager koi hatke theme mile to me too will write
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Ok frnds I need ur opinion...
I have an Abhirika idea...short story...mainly focusing on Tarika...herself as an ordinary girl...with flaws...not serf Abhijeet ki girlfriend usiki bareme sochne wali..a pyar ki dewani..
She will love herself..not the ever sacrificing Mahan...she has better things to do than cry and blush
now if u all permits I will write it down provided no one will bash, one bashing and once again I will turn away from abhirika...
Mujhe Tarika ki portrayal leke pehle hi kaafi rude sugesstions mil chuke hey even that I hate her..I am bias towards dayareya..mein Tarika se jalti hu..so now mujhe kuch sunna pare to story will vanish and no more abhirika from my side will come up
I'm not blackmailing u nor giving dhamki..reader's parna nahi cahe to I will never mind..but parne k liye haan bole to bashing nahi chalegi
I want each rvwr to give their opinion freely and truly
now coming back to the present story
the haphazardly lying figure of Shreya shocked both of them and they rushed forward..Tarika turned Shreya only to find her unconscious..Purvi frantically asked "Tarika ise.."
"pehle bed pey uthate hey.."
with some difficulty both lied her down on bed..Tarika checked fr her pulses with "Purvi jara paani lana.."
and very next moment a very tensed expression covered her face..
Purvi came back with water and sprinkled it on her face..
After some moments Shreya opened her eyes and Purvi instantly asked "thik ho tum.."
Shreya replied weakly "ha pata nahi achanaq chaqqar.."
then they both noticed Tarika's pale face..
Purvi shacked her "Tarika..kya hua.."
Tarika looked up "kuch nahi bas..Shreya kal hum dctr k pass jayenge"
"per Tarika kamjori ki wajase chaqqar agaye honge itne mey dctr.."
but Purvi protested "nahi Shreya kal tum dctr ki pass jaogi.."
Shreya tried to say smthng but Tarika seemed much quite and asked both to come dwn fr dinner
aftr finishing all chores Tarika backed in her room standing by window when she felt someone standing behind
"Tarika koi baat hey.."
Tarika turned, faced Purvi "sayed.."
"mtlb.."
"Purvi mein aab kuch keh nahi sakti kal dctr se milne ki bad hi.."
"Tarika kuch to bolo..kya baat.."
"I think Shreya..wo pregnant hey.."
"kya?"
"ha..mujhe jahataq..malum hua..aab to test ki bad hi conform.."
"Tarika ager yea sach hua to.."
Tarika made her expressions firm with "to iss bache se chutkara pana hoga..warna Shreya ki bachi kuchi jindegi bhi tabah ho jayegi..Purvi tum abhie kisise iss bareme baat nahi krna.."
Purvi just nodded..she too looking tensed..
Tarika patted her shoulder trying to gain some strength and also to give some
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Next day aftr visiting the dctr and doing the test procedures on the way back home Shreya asked
"Tarika koi baat hey?tumne mujhe dctr ki cabin se bahar jane ko kaha aur itne test..tumhe achanaq aise tension..bolo na.."
"Shreya abhie filal kuch mat pucho mujhse..kuch baat waqt ane pey hi pata chale to behtar.."
"per Tarika aise meri tnsion aur bar rahi hey.."
Tarika sighed pressed her palms softly "Shreya..mein ager tumhe leke kuch sochungi galat nahi sochungi..pls tnsion mat lo.."
Shreya was about to say smthng when Tarika's phone rang and she got busy in it..
Shreya thought to herself "tum kuch galat nahi sochogi yea to pata hey per kahi kuch galat ho to nahi raha hey.."
they soon reached their place and found Daya pacing to and fro outside
Tarika came out of cab and signalled Shreya to pay the fare moved forward with "Daya tum.."
"haan..Purvi ko leke sir court gaye aur hume ek file cahiye HQ k liye jo Purvi ki pass thi boss ne vej diya mujhe coolie banake..aur tum log ho ki ghumne nikal gayi..phone kiya tha tumhara busy araha tha aur Shreya ka gher se ring arahi thi.."
Shreya too joined Tarika who is opening the door lock "arey to tum darwaja tor k ghus jate na.."
"kya Tarika fir pitayi hoti meri..mere bhabi ki saheli ki gher hey bhai..waise tum log they kaha"
Tarika entered with "ayo ander ayo..wo hum dctr ke pass gaye they Shreya ki check up k liye..acha tum baitho mein paani aur file lati hu"
Tarika moved in..Shreya standing near the door..Daya instantly turned to Shreya "achanaq dctr kya hua Shreya..tum thik to.."
"kya hua yea to kal reprt ane ki bad pata lagega per haan mein thik hu..per sir Tarika bahut pareshan.."
"per hua kya tha.." his tone is impatient and loud..Shreya looked up in those eyes..again those feelings..the concern she want to ran away from..the untold confession she is scared of..
Daya too looked dwn in her eyes..a fear..a dark shadow of pain and some dried up dreams..
His eyes travelled over her face
she now a day's event dont cared fr her looks..just a roughly tied pony and nothing..as if extremely tired even to look down at herself..those marks still evident showing the struggle a girl have to do may b everyday to save herself
Daya immedtiely turned away his gaze feeling his own eyes will now not listen to him..and may show up as mirror to his mind..
Shreya noticed his change..a creepy feeling crossed her heart..as if she is cheating someone taking away someone's right..stealing away someone's property..she now don't have any right now to have her own rights..but she can't snatch others..
She too moved away
Tarika was standing at room door looking at both studied both the expressions with the thought "ager mera shaq sahi nikla to..kya tab bhi Daya..kya wo thik hoga..kya uss rishte mey khushiya hogi.."
she sighed..moved forward handed over the file to Daya who moved out immedietly..and Shreya rushed in her room..
Tarika glanced at both and moved to get ready fr lab
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36 hours passed quiet fast..it's already next day evening..Purvi Tarika still not at home Shreya flickering pages of magazine but lost in a pair of eyes haunting her..
When she hear the doorbell ring..aftr making herself back to present open the door to find the lab assistant handing over the reports
she took them in and carelessly kept them on sofa..moved in kitchen fr making some preparations fr dinner at least to lessen the burden from other two
she was busy in her work when the landline rang
she pick it up to hear "Shreya..kaisi ho beta?"
its easy fr a child to recognize her mother's voice and the emotions it contains..she is used to it even before she is born..it's a most soothing comforting sound of universe..but this moment she didn't feel the comfort
"ma aap..jee mein thik hu.."
"beta tu gher aja..hum.."
"nahi ma..mein aab woha..aap pey bojh banne nahi jaungi"
"aur jo tu dusre ki saath hey..wo.."
"jis din Purvi ko problem hogi mein yeaha se bhi chali jaungi ma..meri khud ki jindegi khud pey bojh hey..mujhe aab aur kisika bojh nahi barana.."
her mother's sobbing voice can be heard fr a second "thik hey jaha tujhe shanti milti hey wohi reh..per apni ma se baat to karegi na tu?"
Shreya was trying hard to control her tears just replied "hmm.."
and cut the call..she sat down on the sofa to suppress her emotions..
After some extreme difficult efforts she succeeded
she was about to get up when her eyes falls on the reports once again
"aisa kya ana tha iss report mey jo Tarika itni tensed thi.."
she thought fr a while then pulled out the reports..
The first page is showing blood count HB and all those she shook her head and turned to second page receiving the deadliest shock of her life..
She kept staring at those reports fr few seconds then automatically her grip loosened..
Her mind was not in senses but suddenly it sparked smthng and she ran to her room reached for her mobile and dialed her number
"hello Urmi..Urmi mein Shreya.."
"ha Shreya tum..kaisi ho..itni din bad call kiya..sab thik.."
"mujhe tumse milna hey..abhie.."
"abhie..acha to mere clinic ajao..tumhe pata hey na mera clinic.."
"nahi tum as gynocoligist to milogi mujhe per apne clinic mey nahi..kahi aur..baat personal.."
"arey bas do patients hey clinic mey aur koi nahi tum ajao.."
"okay..mein ati hu.."
she cut the call and took some deep breath..first pulled out a sticky note wrote as "Tarika mujhe kahi jaruri kaam se jana hey dinner taq ajaungi..dnt worry"
then pasted it on fridge pulled out a file from her closet containing all her medical reports and also picked up this reports and moved out aftr grabbing her purse and locking the door
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Tarika and Purvi was waiting fr Shreya impatiently,its being already late..her phone also switched off
Purvi aftr some moments of tension said "Tarika mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hey.."
Tarika nodded "aj Shreya ki test reports ani thi..kahi mera shaq sahi..aur Shreya ne wo reports dekh k hi..Purvi darr lag raha hey mujhe"
just then they heard a doorbell and both rushed to open it..
Found Daya standing there supporting Shreya who is looking extremely broken and as if she had faced a tug of war from inside and outside
"Shreya..kya hua? Kaha gayi thi?"
Shreya didn't replied anything but moved to her room like a drunken man and bang close the door behind
Tarika turned to Daya with "tumhe kaha mili Shreya?"
Daya replied solemnly "beach gaya tha..Shreya kaafi agey taq nikal gayi thi samundar ki..meine pucha per tab se aise patthar si chup hey..kuch smjh nahi aya..yea file thi uski haath mey"
Tarika took in the file turned pages and closed her eyes tightly
Daya and Purvi both noticed it
Purvi asked fearfully "Tarika?"
Tarika nodded
Daya impatiently asked "mujhe kuch bataoge pls?"
Tarika uttered "Shreya is pregnant Daya..ma banne wali hey wo"
"kya..per kaise.."
Tarika looked up at Daya..who just gulped dwn the shock and said "reports galat nahi ho skta?"
Tarika shook in no..Daya looked down totally silent
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It's strange na..so many people in world pray just fr a baby and someone is getting it who doesn't want to..
So many people will get all happiness of life only from a baby..and here someone's chance of being happy is also fading with the news
...they were all busy in their thoughts when Purvi suddenly remembers "Tarika...Shreya?"
all three jumped on their feet and rushed to her room...banging her door..
r and r