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Praise isn't it nrml to be ltle confused in this situation?and u r nt wrong sahi smjha apne..
Frnds u all didn't replied?
Only shzk tamanna and kashaf..
So others not interested fr abhirika frm my side?right?
Ok let me fr last time repeat my query
I have an Abhirika idea...short story...mainly focusing on Tarika...herself as an ordinary girl...with flaws...not serf Abhijeet ki girlfriend usiki bareme sochne wali..a pyar ki dewani..
She will love herself..not the ever sacrificing Mahan...she has better things to do than cry and blush
now if u all permits I will write it down provided no one will bash, one bashing and once again I will turn away from abhirika...
Mujhe Tarika ki portrayal leke pehle hi kaafi rude sugesstions mil chuke hey even that I hate her..I am bias towards dayareya..mein Tarika se jalti hu..so now mujhe kuch sunna pare to story will vanish and no more abhirika from my side will come up
I'm not blackmailing u nor giving dhamki..reader's parna nahi cahe to I will never mind..but parne k liye haan bole to bashing nahi chalegi
I want each rvwr to give their opinion freely and truly
Every rvwr pls just one word yes or no… and as tamanna said warning it might not poray them as ever hppy couple…
Lets come to our stry now
After some moments of no response from the other side of door Tarika tensely turned to Daya with "Daya tum..."
he nodded and with a little effort opened the door..Three of them heaved a sigh of relief seeing Shreya lying on bed...
Tarika was first one to start with "Shreya dekho tum.."
She entered the room while speaking and was about to move forward when heard a loud shriek from Purvi both Daya and Tarika turned to Purvi and following her gaze noticed the blood dropping on ground from shreya's wrist..
"Oh no..Purvi jldise first aid box lao.." Tarika instantly rushed to Shreya and after providing basic first aid headed to hospital..
After Shreya is taken in Tarika noticed Daya who is quieter than usual..
But before she can ask anything she hears Purvi "usne itna bara qadam utha liya..ek bar koi aur rasta socha to hota.."
Tarika sighed "sayed uss waqt yea rasta sbse easy laga..o to shuker karo wo usi waqt yea sab nahi kiya warna humare lautte lautte bahut der ho jati.."
something strike Purvi as "Shreya yea sare reports leke kahi gayi thi..sayed uss lab mey reports confirm krne.."
Tarika nodded in no "nahi fir mujhe woha se call ajata wo log jnte hey Shreya meri dost hey..kahi aur gayi hogi..jaha se sayed use akhri umid thi.."
their conversation got interrupted by a continuous ringer and both were sure it was not theirs..Tarika turned to find Daya's phone continuously ringing while he was in some deep thoughts cut from the environment
Tarika shacked him lightly with "Daya tumhara phone.."
Daya came out of his trance "haan?"
"phone baj raha hey.."
he received the call and hearing the well waited voice directly blurted out as "boss hospital ajao pls wo Shreya..tum ajao"
Abhijeet didn't demand any explanation but dscncted the call with an assurance then called back Tarika with "Tarika kya hua?"
"tum arahe ho?"
"ha per bolo to.."
"Shreya ne apni nas kat li.."
"what..mtlb usne suicide?per kiu..mtlb haan stressed thi per aab aise.."
"she is pregnant.."
"kya..."
"ha..aj hi reports ayi.."
"may gawwd..dctr kya bol rahe hey.."
"filal ander hey..tum ayo fir baat krte hey"
"ok.."
they dscnctd the call and soon their wait ended as the dctr came out even before they can ask dctr starts "aap log jante hey ki wo pregnant hey?"
Tarika nodded..
The dctr sighed
Tarika asked "Shreya aab kaisi.."
"khtre se bahar hey per behosh hey aur bahut kamjor bhi.."
Tarika bit her lips and then asked in extreme low tone "dctr aap to sab jnte hey..yea bacha..abode krne.." Daya looked at Tarika with a jerk..Purvi noticed it well she looked at Tarika who preffered to ignore it fr now.
the dctr nodded disappointedly.. "nahi dr. shrivastav..miss Shreya ki jo halat hey aise mey abortion se unki jaan ko..khatra ho sakta hey.."
Daya immediately stopped him "nahi..aisa kuch.."
Tarika turned to him he stopped looking down and moved out from the scene.
Tarika followed her through eyes then turned to dctr with "no dctr yea risk hum nahi le sakte..per..koi aur rasta.."
the dctr just nodded in no..
Tarika sighed..the dctr moved..Tarika and Purvi sat on the bench
Purvi asked quiet helplessly "aab kya hoga?"
Tarika really doesn't have an answer fr this..
Here Daya moved out to the lawn found Abhijeet coming in..
"Abhi.."
Abhijeet scanned him properly "Daya kya hua..Shreya thik hey na?haan?"
Daya just nodded in no..
Abhijeet look at him keenly then asked "Tarika kaha hey?"
"ander.."
Abhijeet pulled out his phone and dialed "hello Tarika Shreya kaisi hey.."
"thik hey..dctr ne kaha khtre se bahar hey..per tum kaha ho.."
"hospital ki bahar"
"wat.."
"haan ata hu.."
he dscnctd the call...
He turned to Daya but found him sitting on bench little far away..he walked over to Daya sat beside him called softly "Daya kya hua..."
"Abhi..sab use bache ko..uska kya kasur boss...use thori na pata..use koi kiu nahi cahta yaar.."
Abhijeet sighed "Daya wo bacha ager ayega bhi to use khushi nahi milegi use sabke itne sawal ki smna krna hoga ki..usse yeahi behter hey.."
"yea bhi to khoon hi hey na"
Abhijeet sighed,yea this is also killing someone..yea the baby is not a cmplete person but its a life..they alwys fight against crime and isnt ending a life not crime..who they are to finish that life..but that life may destroy others life..then if someone kills anyone to save their life then why law gives them punishment..
He was searching fr answers when Daya continued "pata hey dctr ne kaha ager abortion ki koshish ki to Shreya ki jaan ko khtra ho sakta hey.."
"what?"
"haan..Abhi Shreya ki jaan k liye risk nahi lena hey..pls.."
Abhijeet look really troubled..he just press Daya's shoulder "kuch nahi hoga Shreya ko..chal ander chal.."
"mujhe pls thori der akele.."
"meine kaha na chal ander.."
Daya just shook his head "tum chalo ata hu mein.."
Abhijeet nodded and moved in..
He meet Tarika standing near reception..
She seeing him said "hosh ata hi hoga Shreya ko.."
she noticed him bit absent minded.. "Daya se mile?"
"hmm..Tarika wo bacha.."
"pata nahi Abhijeet aab kya hoga.."
before they can continue..Purvi called then infrming Shreya coming to consious..
Abhijeet signalled them with "tum dono millo mein ata hu.."
Tarika & Purvi entered and Shreya burst out with "kiu bachaya haan..kya fayda aab..nahi mar sakti iss paap ko to khud mar jau yeahi behtar hey na.."
Purvi tried to calm her down while Tarika sounded strict with "kya pagalo jaise baat kr rahi ho..mushkil hoga to khud ko khatam kerlo yea kahaki samajhdari hey.."
"ha ho gayi mein pagal..nahi hey koi smjhdari..kya karu dhoti rahu iss paap ko puri jindegi...duniya ki.."
she stopped as the door flunged open and a person marched in..grabbed her arm tightly and chewd "kya bola tumne...bolo kya bola.."
the roar was enough to shiver all the persons in the room..
Tarika tried with much courage "Daya tum.."
"Tarika pls..ha kya kaha bolo.."
"ha kaha meine ise paap..ek gunah ka natija..ek kalank hey mere jindegi per.."
she didn't dare to continue with the tight slap that fell on her cheeck..that spcl marked slap which made criminals remember every detail of case..
She felt her cheeck burning and then some hot liquid beside her lip while the cheeck had the finger marks in reddish blue colour..
Daya was about to hit one more when a strong grip stopped him holding his wrist..
Daya struggled to loosen the grip "choro mujhe..how dare she paap..haan.."
Abhijeet tightened the grip with "kya ker raha hey..hospital hey yea neeche ker awaj.."
"kya neeche karu haan kiu..ek bacha jo aab taq duniya mey nahi aya uski liye kya kya kahi jarahi hey..aur tum mujhe..bachpan se ma baap ki lad mey pali bari hey use kya pata hoga jab koi bache ko paap.."
Abhijeet raised his voice above his "chup bilkul chup..bahar ja..Abhie ki Abhie.."
Daya hit a punch on the bed and turned to move out..Shreya said in hissing voice "to aur kya bolu ise..kaun naam dega ise..aur serf ma ki naam se wo bhi ek raped larki ki bache ko to najayes hi kehlayega na..aur use paap hi.."
Daya turned to face her with "tumhe paap lagta hey na yea..bahut shauq hey isse chutkara pane ka?"
Shreya stared silently at him..Purvi trying to just stop all this Tarika begging Abhijeet through eyes to stop Daya but Abhijeet too was studying Daya keenly
who continued "to ise jamn do mujhe saunp k mar jana jake kahi pey..baap hoga to tumhara yea log ma ka pehchan nahi puchega.."
and he stromed out leaving all stunned..
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