Helplessly In Love (Will be Republished)

Helplessly In Love (Will be Republished)

Teen15 Chapters16.7K Views
Author: queenet
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Carmen Sophi Hernandez Also known as Carly, The second daughter to Mr and Mrs Hernandez finds herself falling helplessly in love.

But what happened when the guy she fell in love with betrays her after she has sacrifice everything just to be with him?





Read to find out how it all came about, in "Helplessly In Love".

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Purple_Fantasies74
Purple_Fantasies74

This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.🥰🥰

2 years ago
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Tres_Aguila
Tres_Aguila

This story is both interesting and hilarious. I love the character design especially that of the female lead. She's so sweet, naive and lively. I can't wait to see how the storyline develops. Kudos to the author.

2 years ago
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shentiments
shentiments

Since there wasn't a synopsis, I had to read the chapter. A synopsis/summary is helpful so that readers know what to expect and can get in right away. It would help if you hooked the readers into something because the story is good. I've enjoyed reading the story and have even commented on the parts I like. The story has potential. Keep writing!

2 years ago
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Dreamerx30
Dreamerx30

Your story is interesting till the three chapters. As it is not too to know about the story. I will tell you to update more and as your book is on MC POV "i" by itself refers to a person so it should be capitalized. By the way, your writing is good don't be demotivate. Keep writing 💓 Wishing you best of luck!!

2 years ago
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queenet
queenet

a very interesting novel,it revolves round characters growth,with its pot twist,suspense ,comedy , betrayal and revenge. you don't wanna miss this

2 years ago
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Priminies
Priminies

Carmen is so cute and adorable.. But i hope can be more attractive to the story from the blurb.. Everyone need to know about Carmen's charm.. I cant wait for next chapter..

2 years ago
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Rin_Nurnia
Rin_Nurnia

For the first chapter, there are some things I want to suggest to you. Firstly, it would be better if you use the 'I' pronounce in capital letter. Secondly, using comma and full stop at the end of the dialogues

2 years ago
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