This story will be one of an MC fighting his inner demons and growing up physically, mentally and emotionally. It is not a Gary Stu story.
The story is going to be long, 300k+ is my current estimate, so you can expect a lot of growing. He won't be at his peak immediately either, as that is boring to write.
Important premise for the story: NO NTR against the MC. I cannot and I do not want to read or write it. Too painful and disgusting.
For his physical stats:
What is achievable will be based on peak human existences from our world. Children and adults alike.
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A young orphan is thrown into the chaotic world of Got/ASOIAF with three limited wishes.
"Unlimite-"
"No."
"Sung Jin-"
"No."
"Super Saiy-"
"No."
"An army of Poke-"
'Sigh' "No."
"One Poke-"
"No. Well, a Zigzagoon, maybe."
"No thanks, then. Marve-"
"Are you retarded? No. Remember the damn parameters I set."
"I am gonna die..."
"You already did, stop being a pussy or I will regret ever giving you this chance."
The SI is a pathetic hypocrite with divine idiocy and naivety as a basis for his being. All these fake 'care' and stupid wake up call is also annoying, it ruins it all.
Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Language and grammar is good. Reading will not give you headache. Love the character design. Author keep up the good work
One of the major selling point of this fic is the above average grammar. Not perfect, but well beyond the standard of WN. Especially GoT/ASOIAF Fic. I can't say about the update consistency for now, but from what the author note, he set a 3-5 chapter a week, consist of 15k words. The plot is not rushed, and the MC is not a Gary Stu so far. Action have consequences, and there's always something you can't control in life. The MC have something to strive for, and he will do anything in his power to achieve it or die trying. Or, making someone else die in his stead. Author have to be careful to juggle the convoluted plot that even Martin struggle for. Only advice is don't put too much stuff on the table all at the same time.
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Only problem is it doesn't matter how much I let it stack before reading it always ends with me asking for more keep writing author as the only few mature authors on this platform love your book.
So very very good keep going.
it is really good. one of the best one si got/asoiaf story I have read
Did you drop?????????????????????? Please tell me you didn't.
Pretty average GOT fanfic. Makes the same mistakes every other GOT fanfic does. Has the same premise as every other GOT fanfi. (Make an MC Jon snow, spend 20+ chapters on his childhood, give him special beast companions) you know the drill. It’s in no way a bad novel, I just feel its not special either. I’m hoping that by the time the MC reaches adulthood, the author lets the novel take off, because hes hinted at some plot points through (pov changes) but we haven’t really seen much of anything.
I like this so far. looking forward to more. ...................................................................................................................................
Another wonderful GOT fanfic the story has a lot of potential to grow to morethan 300 chapters without shortenjng the word counts every chapter..
it's a great story you guys should read it
This fic is much better and less emotional than the summary implies. The summary kind of put me off, but I decided to read a bit and couldn’t stop. Great book.
How does it look with updates there hasn t been one in a long time