The Soldier Princess

@Abi_Shri#1434 I read a few of your chapters. The novel is pretty good when you consider that it's your first work. There are some issues like grammar being noticeably bad... Not too bad but there are a few minor mistakes that are noticeable. The story seems to be interesting but the pacing is too fast and certainly, there can be some improvements in how you present the story. some minor details such as the king being too humble when he should be authoritative. ( Referring to the first chapter, his massage where he's 'requesting' his subjects to 'understand'. There are few mistakes similar to this but can be ignored. I haven't read fully yet but the first few chapters are overall good.. 6/10