Limitless Devil in DxD

The story is just meh. First off this is a god wish cliche fic. The problem is that the wishes were not very op well it had potential but the mc doesn’t use the wishes to their full capacity. Another thing is the mc wished for unlimited potential but only reached highclass strength after 11 years of hard constant training. While that is decent other characters in the same fic reach it in significantly less time. He also has certain categories that he is horrible at. The excuse being he isn’t talented but by having unlimited potential talent is pointless cause he has not restrictions in any category. He even gives up a training path to train something else, this makes the unlimited potential basicly trash. He grows like any other side character would. Even though the wishes should have given him mc levels of growth. The side characters are very mid, they seem like an npc tbh. The progression of the novel is very inconsistent. Both is strength wise and plot wise. The writing quality is decent so there’s that. There are a lot of sections in thjs fic that are unnecessary or just plain stupid.

A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast.

"God gives me WISHES" story. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

Bruh what do you mean no broken wishes asked most of his wishes are broken already, excluding the mutated peices, but thats already pretty powerful too.

Idk I think it is rea fast and the character are like robots

It does has potential, only the 1st chapter to this date but it's quite good. Looking forward for the development of this story

what is the problem with making wishes op? DXD is a dangerous world where they can hurt your loved ones, if it were up to me I would ask to be a god or have the potential to be. People are stupid if they think nothing bad will happen for making unimportant wishes.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

l look foward for the next chapter keep it up

Desejos merda,o MC tem complexo de salvador,mas estupido pq salva para dar todas as pessoas com potencial para a rias,oq é sem sentido,ela tá fazendo a nobreza dela sem mover um dedo enquanto ele arrisca a vida para fazer por ela com a desculpa de estratégia a longo prazo pq sabe que tem guerra,a família dele não passa de npcs,a idade dele é bagunçada e os pedidos são mal usados,pediu essa coisa de aura mas mesmo com treino pesado aínda tá "fraco" e fica dando uma de " eu sou o único que pode salvar a todos" sendo que seria mais inteligente montar a nobreza dele e cooperar com os maou usando a inteligência

this story sucks. there's so many things wrong with it. why is his age all over the place? why ask for wishes for stuff that's already given to him without using them? plus the fact that everything is so random and out of place. Don't waste your time with this mess.

this fanfic is good so far but between Chapter 15 and 22 you mixed the chapters. I was listening while working and got confused but I couldn't check at the time u should fix that

This fanfic is way chaotic with its story development as the first 6 chapter are of what happened either previous or next chapter wi th little to no changes whatsoever.

Author please fix the chapters and the age sequence, sometime s the mc is cold but then he becomes a rebel like??? Plz can you seperate the old chapters and the new