This is MY kingdom!

To write a book like this takes is hard, its like writing the game of thrones or harry potter, this boils down to creative and descriptive writing, not everyone have that ability to do so,however this Author pulled it off i read the first three chapters and even though its till the beginning i can visualize this like a movie. Great Job Author this is more than just a book its a Gem of a masterpiece, keep up the good work. Thank you

An interesting story , well written and executed. I recommend to give it a try if anyone is reading my comment. You won't be disappointed.

The overall storyline is interesting and blood boiling. Highly recommended for all Fantasy readers. it is one of a kind that is definitely worth a try!

I'll start by saying this book is really good. Compared to most books on webnovel, this is a 10/10. Grammar and punctuation are on point, and the plot isn't lacking. But the only problem I have is how slow-paced it is. I laughed a few times, but it lacks that element of excitement. I need blood-boiling excitement, but apart from that, this book is very good...

I am currently on chapter 9. The story telling in this novel is great & so is the dialogue. The story brings something fresh to the table, the writing quality is good and so are the characters. Definitely adding this to my library. Loving your novel author. Will definitely finish ride along with you on your journey.

The chemistry between the characters is fantastic, and the author does a good job giving worldbuilding through dialogue instead of purely info-dumping it in narration. This feels like it will be an unusually charming entry in the genre!

I think its biggest strength is its dialogue. The back and forth between the characters are exceedingly entertaining. I think you'd make a great screenplay writer :)

I really like this novel, I will keep reading it, each of its chapters excites me, you don't know what will happen in the next chapter and I really like that, I will keep reading it....

Can I praise the writing style firstly? This book is written beautifully. The use of grammar is stylish and makes reading a lot more enjoyable. The plot moves along smoothly and at a beautiful pace— the readers are not kept in suspense for long. If you would give some sort of warning about risque/racy content, it would be even better. Good job overall.

Very good writing style. The story has a good background and the conversations with the side characters impressed me a lot. The world building also has a fine pace. May the author continue this work.

I really like the dialogue between the characters and the fact that you manage to keep the conversations interesting. The general style of writing is good. I'm really glad to see that it's not one of those with space between each line. This is proper writing! Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]

I am thoroughly enjoying the story and storytelling! I look forward to each released chapter to read. In my opinion this is a fresh and welcoming experience of action adventure genre!

It is a good read. I enjoyed thoroughly since the start. The story development is on point and so are the characters. The author has done really good work. I would recommend giving it a try.