(Chapter #1) What happened?

I woke with a start and a pounding head. I remember it was at the bar with a couple friends just relaxing. I suddenly realized the smoke and screams coming outside of my apartment, I see my friend daniel dead asleep on the couch a little vomit on his shirt I suddenly looked outside the window down on the street below. It was chaos, people were fleeing from other people? and they were Eating each other?! At that moment I also realize the National guard and their Humvees with their assault rifles and gas masks firing indiscriminately at the horde of man eating people. Zombies is the most fitting word for them, I see a semi plowing its way past the barricades of the National guard not before they shoot the driver dead though but it was too late the barricade was broken and the horde rushed through the gap in defense, Just flooding in. I rush to my buddys side waking him up he mumbles just 5 more minutes Jacob, we have no time for 5 more minutes I think shaking him with more force and power.

He finally gets up asking "What Jacob I was sleeping" all I do in response was drag him to the window to see what i do, and he is shocked to say the least pinching himself hard then rubbing his eyes again mouth agape. he stammers wa what the, his eyes go as wide as possible. All I say in response is I don't know but i say we need to grab Non perishables blankets water the necessities and such. He also grabs his father's 2 guns a Glock-19 and his AR-15 and all 4 boxes of 9mm each with 50 bullets well one has 47 since he went to test fire the glock-19 before a couple years ago, he grabs 3 boxes of 5.56x45mm for his rifle. Jacob with a couple of tears in his eye as he remembers his dad cleaning the weapons when he was just 15 years old always encouraging him to learn and so he did for about 3 weeks. If I knew now what I did then I would have spent the last year with him he remembers the call from his mom crying saying my dad died in a car wreck from a drunk driver. I wipe the tears out of my eye as I collect everything and see Daniel scurrying around collecting everything I asked for in a military grade size and quality backpack I got from his father and a old backpack for school. we are almost ready to go now just grabbing the last roll of toliet paper some medicine and a couple of other things. So long diary I if I'm still alive I'll write again

And that concludes chapter 1 I want to know what you all think of it so far and If possible some constructive criticism thanks all