Vampire Highschool Highschool

I love this book alot. I'm so happy you were able to get it contracted author! keep up the good work❤️

Nice story❤️author doing a good job! i am impressed!

The story is good as far as I have read. There is bit of mistakes in your chapters like "What a second," you have wrote in chapter 2. It will be okay if you correct it. Otherwise the plot of the story was interesting. It was giving me the feel of twilight. More ink to your pen author. And congratulations on get a contract from webnovel. Looking forward to reading your story till the end. Good luck!

First things first, there are a lot of punctuation errors which made me read the lines more than once, breaking the immersion. There are minor grammatical mistakes too but they can be overlooked. Another thing that bothered me was the conversations. In writing, the first letter of a sentence should always capitalised but this book does it otherwise. It bothered me to no end but well, maybe that's just me. As for the story, it has potential to be really good or maybe even better but because of above mentioned reasons, it didn't manage to hook me in. And please change the synopsis. It is very confusing. But hey, this is all a subjective opinion so fight on, author! (Congrats on getting contracted!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉)

This my kind of story, definitely adding this to my shelf [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good masterpiece author

Can you do a little adjustment to the synopsis apart from that your book is good to go, I love it, want it and enjoyed it, added it in my library, I really love it.