True crime Lord: The ruthless Gang BOSS

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this is the first review I have written, so here we go. it is a great story so far, maybe a little fast but very enjoyable. I hope the story keeps getting updated. I would love to see the more technical side of running a crime organization. this story should be higher and more popular. the author seems to have trouble getting motivated to make more chapters. to him, I say you are doing amazing, and your stuff is worth my time at least

So far I’m enjoying it. Hope we get another chap soon.

The chapters miss the flow between them and there's no proper development of plot. the cartel seems to change from beginning ch 1 to ch 30 in a large manner (also same with the personality of mc after only five days).

Great story, just a few problems with grammar and spelling but overall I'm enjoying the story. Looking forward to what happens next. . . keep on updating and I'll keep on reading