Separate tents

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Prince James nodded and tilted his head, his voice filled with suppressed rage. "Brother, we all care deeply for our new members, but separating the tents may cause division within the troops. It might give rise to discrimination and discontent among those who do not have the same privileges."

Richard's gaze shifted between his loyal companions, his conviction unwavering. He could understand so well why James didn't want him to separate the tents; he wanted a general tent. So he said with a deep breath, "I understand the concerns, but my team members' presence here is delicate. And one thing, it is just for my members; if you guys want, you can tell them to separate from the general one."