City of Desire

I am the author, of course; I will rate my novel five stars, but seriously it is good, Do read and write a review.

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My biggest three issues in the novel can all be solved with some editing, I mean I swear it was over a hundred chapters before suite was spelled as suite instead of suit. He'd go to his suit, shower and change into his suit, before leaving his suit headed to someone else's suit. Besides editing stuff though, I really like the story and binged all 249 chapters. Also, not what I was expecting when I read the synopsis.

I see potential here………………………………………………. I will keep reading so write more 😀 Please

the novel is pretty interesting, looking forward to read the next chapters

loved it. I had wanted to read a good litrpg for long, and this one seemed good.

Read till 612, very nice plot progression, concept and world building, not very much plot holes, bit a little too pov shift at the 400 ish chapter onwards grammar and spelling mistakes are there

Unexpectedly a true hidden gem. I went in not expecting very much, except for some casual smut. And at first I was raging, every chapter because of the terrible writing quality, likely audio dictated, with no editing. But similar to monster integration, the story and especially the world building is super, and very unique, it's what keeps you reading despite the initial flaws, and fortunately the writing quality improves a lot as the novel progresses. It features a very interesting setting, very unique power system and unexpectedly a lot of decently thought out politics. Binged all 600 chapters so far, even skipping work reading all night. >_>'' Excited to read how it continues. [img=recommend]

The Best of Best. Need him to get Carla pregnant 🤣 and also get married and have kids 💯

this is one of the best books I have read in a while. Highly recommend it.

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A good novel. Hope author keeps writing. I enjoyed the brothel buusiness building. Would have like it if he enjoyed the employees iyky I like stories where the mc is actually supported by the family resources. Having the mc go against the family in other stories is so cliche. Action is decent and pretty fun. Recent chapters are awesome kingdombuilding sections. I have read so many kingdombuilding light novels. If you can ignore some grammar errors and follow the story youll like this. Also world building is decent. I recommend a good kingdombuilding novel called rome must fall. Its written by author of the Mediterranean hegemony novel.

i loved this book so far, can anyone suggest some more novels like that which has extensive Kingdoms building and politics and not op mc

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