Dual Swordmaster
Author: dragon_hunter
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Julius, a regular part timer, is reborn in a noble family. the 6th son of the Venture family Gabriel. The Venture family is a renowned swordsmen family part of the 12 noble sword master families . Gabriel picked to Dual wielding one of the most frowned upon forms of mastery in his family leading to his “accidental” death.
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Hi! Your story has a lot of potential, and I really like the concept. However, I strongly recommend using ChatGPT to help with grammar, spelling, capitalization, and especially formatting (paragraphs, spacing, etc...). Right now, those issues seriously affect readability. At times, it becomes confusing and hard to follow the plot, there are moments where you think something is happening, only to realize it’s actually the opposite. It makes the reading experience frustrating, which is a shame because the core idea is promising. Just to be clear: ChatGPT isn’t great for writing your story, but it’s amazing for correcting what you’ve already written. It can fix about 95% of the problems without changing your style or story. I really hope you’ll revise the first few chapters with that in mind. Keep it up.