The Extra's Indifference

The Extra's Indifference

Fantasy117 Chapters1.1M Views
Author: Kayleren
4.09
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Read my new novel! ----> Villain: Puppeteer Narrator

18 Reviews
4.09
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Crak
Crak

Interesting story and world design Mc is perfect : smart, sly and cold Biggest downside however is the rather atrocious writing quality. Author please at least read yourself .

2 years ago
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PRINCEAETHER
PRINCEAETHER

It's a good start I will write my full review when it is at least 20 chapters.

3 years ago
5
Sweepers
Sweepers

I think it’s a great start, especially with main character personality

3 years ago
3
Grapes098
Grapes098

Why was it dropped!? It was so good!

2 years ago
2
TheWanderingBard
TheWanderingBard

World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author

2 years ago
2
AlfDeT_Valedstorm
AlfDeT_Valedstorm

It's extremely awesome with a nice character description and development. I really like it and am just hoping that it will never be dropped.

2 years ago
2
SenSha
SenSha

A very interesting story and was improving in all aspects by the chapter! Unfortunately it was dropped, i hope the author thinks of picking it back up in the future or maybe doing a reboot with the same concept eventually. I enjoyed reading about the MCs apathy and manipulation as it was as youd expect from someone who is apathetic not evil. All things are measured by their worth and benefits in his own twisted thought pattern and not just cringe evil for the sake of evil like other dark mcs.

2 years ago
1
DARKSOVEREIGN
DARKSOVEREIGN

Basically, i attract to this novel be cause of the sypnosis whoch mentioned that the mc have a crazy potential in that world, but as it going on the mc potential doesn’t seem op to me except for some mysterious power hidden in him.

2 years ago
1
REKT_Mate
REKT_Mate

Reveal Spoiler

2 years ago
1
Rownn
Rownn

Trying my best to keep reading at, at chapter 2 as of now. While it does seem promising, it's can be painful to try and comprehend most of what is written since it reads as if it was written by a child. I can only hope it gets written better later on and give it a better score.

2 years ago
1
Marcelito_Moreno
Marcelito_Moreno

A very amazing story with cool MC and many amazing girls

2 years ago
1
god_of_war_5752
god_of_war_5752

I really like this story so far I just hope you can get a proof reader soon it's kinda hard to read this because of the writing issues.

2 years ago
1
user123_4
user123_4

great start I think it deserves a bit more views ,I hope author doesn't drop or anything

2 years ago
1
JxstASyko
JxstASyko

Got hooked fast as I like books/novels like this, only gripe was the writing quality. Shame it was dropped

2 years ago
0
PetrickSetar
PetrickSetar

honestly I don't know Webnovel works, sometimes good Novel is free like From Mr.Immortal Novel, while novel written by Middle schoolers its not free.

2 years ago
0