Interesting story and world design
Mc is perfect : smart, sly and cold
Biggest downside however is the rather atrocious writing quality.
Author please at least read yourself .
2 years ago
8
PRINCEAETHER
It's a good start I will write my full review when it is at least 20 chapters.
3 years ago
5
Sweepers
I think it’s a great start, especially with main character personality
3 years ago
3
Grapes098
Why was it dropped!? It was so good!
2 years ago
2
TheWanderingBard
World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author
2 years ago
2
AlfDeT_Valedstorm
It's extremely awesome with a nice character description and development.
I really like it and am just hoping that it will never be dropped.
2 years ago
2
SenSha
A very interesting story and was improving in all aspects by the chapter! Unfortunately it was dropped, i hope the author thinks of picking it back up in the future or maybe doing a reboot with the same concept eventually. I enjoyed reading about the MCs apathy and manipulation as it was as youd expect from someone who is apathetic not evil. All things are measured by their worth and benefits in his own twisted thought pattern and not just cringe evil for the sake of evil like other dark mcs.
2 years ago
1
DARKSOVEREIGN
Basically, i attract to this novel be cause of the sypnosis whoch mentioned that the mc have a crazy potential in that world, but as it going on the mc potential doesn’t seem op to me except for some mysterious power hidden in him.
2 years ago
1
REKT_Mate
Reveal Spoiler
2 years ago
1
Rownn
Trying my best to keep reading at, at chapter 2 as of now. While it does seem promising, it's can be painful to try and comprehend most of what is written since it reads as if it was written by a child.
I can only hope it gets written better later on and give it a better score.
2 years ago
1
Marcelito_Moreno
A very amazing story with cool MC and many amazing girls
2 years ago
1
god_of_war_5752
I really like this story so far I just hope you can get a proof reader soon it's kinda hard to read this because of the writing issues.
2 years ago
1
user123_4
great start I think it deserves a bit more views ,I hope author doesn't drop or anything
2 years ago
1
JxstASyko
Got hooked fast as I like books/novels like this, only gripe was the writing quality. Shame it was dropped
2 years ago
0
PetrickSetar
honestly I don't know Webnovel works, sometimes good Novel is free like From Mr.Immortal Novel, while novel written by Middle schoolers its not free.
Interesting story and world design Mc is perfect : smart, sly and cold Biggest downside however is the rather atrocious writing quality. Author please at least read yourself .
It's a good start I will write my full review when it is at least 20 chapters.
I think it’s a great start, especially with main character personality
Why was it dropped!? It was so good!
World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author
It's extremely awesome with a nice character description and development. I really like it and am just hoping that it will never be dropped.
A very interesting story and was improving in all aspects by the chapter! Unfortunately it was dropped, i hope the author thinks of picking it back up in the future or maybe doing a reboot with the same concept eventually. I enjoyed reading about the MCs apathy and manipulation as it was as youd expect from someone who is apathetic not evil. All things are measured by their worth and benefits in his own twisted thought pattern and not just cringe evil for the sake of evil like other dark mcs.
Basically, i attract to this novel be cause of the sypnosis whoch mentioned that the mc have a crazy potential in that world, but as it going on the mc potential doesn’t seem op to me except for some mysterious power hidden in him.
Reveal Spoiler
Trying my best to keep reading at, at chapter 2 as of now. While it does seem promising, it's can be painful to try and comprehend most of what is written since it reads as if it was written by a child. I can only hope it gets written better later on and give it a better score.
A very amazing story with cool MC and many amazing girls
I really like this story so far I just hope you can get a proof reader soon it's kinda hard to read this because of the writing issues.
great start I think it deserves a bit more views ,I hope author doesn't drop or anything
Got hooked fast as I like books/novels like this, only gripe was the writing quality. Shame it was dropped
honestly I don't know Webnovel works, sometimes good Novel is free like From Mr.Immortal Novel, while novel written by Middle schoolers its not free.