A tale of a newly broke gambler who finds himself immersed in a world-wide phenomenon of the New MMORPG that's ground breaking for its time. With solid leveling and explanations this novels goal is to satisfy that itch for a good adventure story while having deep plot. My main focus is on making the systems fluid and solid for future world building. The Blacksmith and other supplementary systems are well thought out and should bring a few surprises along the way.

Blacksmith's Exploration of New Heaven(MMORPG)

VIDEOGAME

MMORPG

Character design
The MC characteristic are still a bit unclear.
Real World.He is broke (loss his money through gambling),reckless (spend all his money to buy a pod that only have 1 game and bet on his luck hoping the game would be good),lazy (he lives in a house full of trash and never bother to clean it).
Then comes Mc in the game world.He is decisive and know how to think for the future.He have the determination and will to do something when he need to.
All in all,Mc is a character that we will discover more about him and im sure author put a lot of thought in his character.5 out of 5 star.

World background
The first few chapter when Mc get inside the game fully tell you about how the games are going to work and what are the level limit.There are no big city being mention as we are only in the starter city right now.Authors know what he is trying to do so this will be 5 out of 5 star.

Story development
We got the usual broke Mc that needs to pay of his rent after losing all his money through gambling and buying the pod.Suprisingly authors explain that he goes to work and willing to work which is a great plus right there.The only force development for me would be when Mc meet the God Of Blacksmith in the starter city and Mc luckily pass GoB test to becoming is disciple/direct students.The reason for GoB resides in the starter city is pretty solid for me.4 out of 5 star.

Writing quality
As long as the novel is readable than im fine with it.A few grammar errors are normal.So 5 out of 5 star

Updating stability
New novel with few chapter currently.Novels update daily so good enough.The author is a new author so hopefully he doesnt burnt out and feels greatly pressure with the expectation of reader and then suddenly goes missing for months.5 out of 5 star.

Hey everyone the Author here!
I’m looking forward to explore the world of New Heaven and the heavens above! Please enjoy my novel and look forward to future twists,unmasks, and unique twists.
The only true struggle that I need to smoothen out is the parallel heavens having the same places and monsters but making them more unique and interesting. Join the ride through the 6 heavens and the final battle! 