JJK: Unrivaled Under The Heavens

You drop all of your stories before they hit 20 chapters, then you start a new one and drop that story, again and again. Your going to drop the new story your making befor it hits 20 chapters i can already see it. Nice stories though

Mc has a hero complex. If others like it fine, just not for me. Character interactions feel off, I’m trash at explaining so I won’t elaborate. If I read correctly, after chapter 2-3 his system is completely useless as anything other than a status screen. The characters have reactions that make no sense that make me feel as the picture states.

man you jjust had to destroy ours dreams of to see a good mha fanfic that the mc have a system but is not super hiper mega ultra over power

sadly 1 is the least amount of stars i can give if I could I'd have given negative

Really cool start of the novel. I hope the novel is going to continue with being so good and you are not going to drop it.

This story starts so well but the author literally says something just to contradict it in the next chapter. Also the MC supposedly wants to explore Japan and then out of nowhere he just starts living with a random family. Also that family just decides to invite a random person to their house for no apparent reason and they act as if they had always lived together when they literaly met the previous day.

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This author always has amazing work however he never finished them, so as you can guess this fanfic also has an amazing start so far but do expect him to drop it after 20 chapters or so, and believe me nothing you say will change his mind after he/she drop it, I don't think bro even check our comments or reviews. It's sad but hey what can we do?🤷

this is a good fanfic but the update is slow but it's okay for people that are patient

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very slow update...i forgot half the story when i read a new chapter after a month off update or so.... I'm quitting this fanfic...very bad story development too.😮‍💨😮‍💨

please don't droppe this story 😭your storys are amazing but you dropped them so please don't droppe this

Turn your brain off if you wanna read this cause there are just so many contradictions and the mc acting like an actual bozo it’s just annoying only reason I read this is cause nobara is fl and author most likely gonna drop before it even gets to that point overall if you have nothing better to do read it ig (this meme can sum up the entire story)

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