MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE
[#r18] [#SLOW BURN] [#INC][Do not translate my work you rulate site bastards.]
My life changed for better or for worse after Harley injected me with an experimental drug that transformed my body into a hunk. And I have awakened a freaking Eroge System.
Time to make money and create a harem of my own. But, only if it was that easy. My life was filled with beautiful girls, sex and shit tons of problems...
Hidden family secrets, Vampires, League of Assassins, Anti-Mutant organization, My freaking unstable power, The one who laughs...
Oh, and not to forget fucking Deadites...
...and many more...
This is the story of Multiverse, so anything can pop up from anywhere...
[SLOW BURN]
If you are not into slow-burn, pass along. Don't read. I am getting enough complaints from casual readers who want to know everything in a single chapter. But, if you have patience, read the first vol and then decide... As for blue balling, read vol-2 and decide for yourself. Lacking action? Read vol-3 and decide.
[NO MINDLESS ORGY OR FUCK DOLLS] [NO NTR] [IN*ST> Yes]
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This is fan fiction. I don't own the characters or plot except for the characters and plot I created.
I am also posting this on Scribblehub.
Cover picture is AI generated.
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Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...
Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.
I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:
The concept is nice but the story itself has too fast, random chaotic pacing to be easy to follow. It reads a bit like an MTL in writing quality too with wuxia typical situations. As the story progresses the pacing becomes faster and faster too. His sister who in the first 15 chapters is referred to in a way that it seems to be a little sister, turns out to not be all that little as the story suddenly takes an 18+ twist with her when shopping. Which is kinda awkward because you then realise that is was a language issue that caused the assumption that she was atleast 10 years younger untill that point that things take such a turn.... So yeah, on the whole, the concept is fun, but the story itself could do with some better pacing and more natural grammar in English.
Story is nice and all but i kinda boring Its feel like chores to read chapters. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.
I like how the author introduced some forgotten powers like void from Marvel and weapon master from DC while keeping it balanced as the fic's name. You have my praise for showing the dark side of the war instead of flashy fights that ignores the damage and deaths regular civilians suffer while the heroes go home safe and sound. And obviously, the s*xual contents are well written. Dialogues can be improved further. Overall an interesting concept depicting the daily life of a civilian MC struggling with his new power.
so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read
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quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?
I think I have mentioned what to expect from this fic in the fic description and in the first chapter. I also do public polls for the READERS OF CULTURES and then I decide what to focus on. Even then, some retards are spamming fake reviews and comments randomly without any explanations. THOSE BRAINLESS COMMENTS AND REVIEWS WILL BE DELETED>
If you are a man of culture, you must read this. Good writing and I like the story line[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best part of this FanFiction is the crossover with marvel, dc, and the authors inclusion of awakenings. While there aren’t many chapters, it’s still, in my opinion, one of the better fan fictions out there. This fanfiction and the spider are simply the best.
keep up the great work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Changing my review from 3 stars to 5 stars. The start of this fiction was too rough and the MC is one of the most hated characters from the start and many drop it due to that. Some even say they lost their brain cells and MC is idi#t. To them- Don't say that without reading the vol3. Do you know what character development is? Trust me, the character development of MC and the other characters around him is insane. I love the depth of the characters and the growth beyond what you often find in your regular fan fiction. You want a good story to read, this is it. Slow burn that rewards you in just perfect time.
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